Oh Life!
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Comment from royowen
I take it this is up for review, but you leave little option open to interpretation, so you don't leave much open to comment, so I'll just say well done, good job my friend, blessings Roy
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I take it this is up for review, but you leave little option open to interpretation, so you don't leave much open to comment, so I'll just say well done, good job my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from JM daSilva
This reminds me of Zen koans. What is the sound of one hand clapping? If a tree falls in the woods, and no one sees it or hears the noise, has it fallen?
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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This reminds me of Zen koans. What is the sound of one hand clapping? If a tree falls in the woods, and no one sees it or hears the noise, has it fallen?
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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THANKS
Comment from Nebukadneser
Intelligent brilliant writing! Even the good forget things even with the best of intentions as life carries on onto summon day.
Well done and thanks for the hidden message - I loss.
you're a star
Nebukadneser
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Intelligent brilliant writing! Even the good forget things even with the best of intentions as life carries on onto summon day.
Well done and thanks for the hidden message - I loss.
you're a star
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
Comment from Janet Foor
I think to relate
Later! Wink it now somehow,
'Oh here,' trust my heart.
'Summon day' comes, where is it?
Shame! Re-vow! Daily shows lose most!
I feel like I'm reading a foreign language even though it is obviously English...I am lost.
Best wishes
Janet
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I think to relate
Later! Wink it now somehow,
'Oh here,' trust my heart.
'Summon day' comes, where is it?
Shame! Re-vow! Daily shows lose most!
I feel like I'm reading a foreign language even though it is obviously English...I am lost.
Best wishes
Janet
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice tanka. It seems that though he/she tries daily, the narrator in this poem can't quite relate to the world. He/she wants someone to trust his/her heart or maybe the narrator wants to trust his/heart to set itself free to relate.
I hope the Summon day comes soon to stop the loneliness.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Nice tanka. It seems that though he/she tries daily, the narrator in this poem can't quite relate to the world. He/she wants someone to trust his/her heart or maybe the narrator wants to trust his/heart to set itself free to relate.
I hope the Summon day comes soon to stop the loneliness.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
Comment from Titanx9
I read this one a couple of times. I'm not sure I got the message you want the reader, me, to discern, but I believe there is definitely anger displayed in an ongoing discourse about the minutiae.
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I read this one a couple of times. I'm not sure I got the message you want the reader, me, to discern, but I believe there is definitely anger displayed in an ongoing discourse about the minutiae.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
Comment from steevie
Faith, I think is the word that you're looking for. If we have faith in someone, we will not have to fake responses and wait until its too late.
sorry, that I'll I have
steve
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Faith, I think is the word that you're looking for. If we have faith in someone, we will not have to fake responses and wait until its too late.
sorry, that I'll I have
steve
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
Comment from Malerie
Your writing are so intense; with just a few word, you manage to create an intriging piece of work. Sorry, I failed the test, I've read this piece over and over but there is something so mystreious about it. Thanks - the artwork is great!
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Your writing are so intense; with just a few word, you manage to create an intriging piece of work. Sorry, I failed the test, I've read this piece over and over but there is something so mystreious about it. Thanks - the artwork is great!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
Comment from NHazelwood
I am assuming that this poem is about recollections images or memories the burst forth in the mind! I'm not really sure if my assumption is correct but I truly enjoyed your poem and your creativity!
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I am assuming that this poem is about recollections images or memories the burst forth in the mind! I'm not really sure if my assumption is correct but I truly enjoyed your poem and your creativity!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
Comment from jaydub99
Once again I feel a huge message is being conveyed and the passion and focus you give is evident. However, the jumbling of words and complex "key" at the end leave me a little confused. Your first line is great, I think to relate. I am really trying to relate...it just seems confusing to me.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Once again I feel a huge message is being conveyed and the passion and focus you give is evident. However, the jumbling of words and complex "key" at the end leave me a little confused. Your first line is great, I think to relate. I am really trying to relate...it just seems confusing to me.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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THANKS
