Oh Life!
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Comment from rspoet
Loss is something that affects all of us in many different ways.
Many lose they way in the complexities of this life.
But then, there are different interpretations of "the way."
Few will agree on one option.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Loss is something that affects all of us in many different ways.
Many lose they way in the complexities of this life.
But then, there are different interpretations of "the way."
Few will agree on one option.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from elchupakabra
A wink and a nod - after reading three straight pieces, they all have a wink in them. A thread through multiple pieces or perhaps a happy accident? Great work, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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A wink and a nod - after reading three straight pieces, they all have a wink in them. A thread through multiple pieces or perhaps a happy accident? Great work, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another witty, snarky, slightly in-your-face poem. made my day reading it and thinking of my own moments when I wink at the passage of time and the day goes on without me.
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another witty, snarky, slightly in-your-face poem. made my day reading it and thinking of my own moments when I wink at the passage of time and the day goes on without me.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Is this an acrostic poem, 'I LOSS'? I am just curious. I could be all wrong. I am not a poet so when it comes to poetry I miss a lot. I did enjoy reading. Thank you for sharing.
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Is this an acrostic poem, 'I LOSS'? I am just curious. I could be all wrong. I am not a poet so when it comes to poetry I miss a lot. I did enjoy reading. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I am coming across another creative writing from you. I am no specialist poet, but I think this is a Tanka poem. But I have not counted the syllables. I enjoy your unique style. Keep them coming!
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I am coming across another creative writing from you. I am no specialist poet, but I think this is a Tanka poem. But I have not counted the syllables. I enjoy your unique style. Keep them coming!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I have no clue as to what this means--even the author's notes don't help. This is frustrating to me--the words and phrasing don't add up to anything I can make sense of.
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I have no clue as to what this means--even the author's notes don't help. This is frustrating to me--the words and phrasing don't add up to anything I can make sense of.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
5-7-5-7-7 No Tanka; Wink, escape, assume, forget and lose!
A chapter in the book Oh Life!
Really!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
As always, I have no clue what you're talking about. It's almost like reading a sentence backwards.
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5-7-5-7-7 No Tanka; Wink, escape, assume, forget and lose!
A chapter in the book Oh Life!
Really!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
As always, I have no clue what you're talking about. It's almost like reading a sentence backwards.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Very well planned and presented. Yes it is 5-7-5-7-7 syllable poem. You have shared in depth your thoughts around "Really"
It tells its own story through your original unique thinking. The last line wraps up your thoughts and should get your readers thinking as well. "Shame! Re-Vow! The final comment "Daily shows the lose most!" Finished with me questioning and changing the word lose only for the benefit of my thinking to"loss"! Hopefully I gained something from your first two sentences and can apply them to reality. What a Shame if I have missed the revelation.
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Very well planned and presented. Yes it is 5-7-5-7-7 syllable poem. You have shared in depth your thoughts around "Really"
It tells its own story through your original unique thinking. The last line wraps up your thoughts and should get your readers thinking as well. "Shame! Re-Vow! The final comment "Daily shows the lose most!" Finished with me questioning and changing the word lose only for the benefit of my thinking to"loss"! Hopefully I gained something from your first two sentences and can apply them to reality. What a Shame if I have missed the revelation.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from Raul1
I like your format of your poem. A good structure of poetry. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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I like your format of your poem. A good structure of poetry. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What does diverse courses in dimen mean? I have never heard of the word dimen before? "wink it somehow" and "Shame Re-vow! Daily shows lose most" I would love to know what these words mean? Love Dolly x
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What does diverse courses in dimen mean? I have never heard of the word dimen before? "wink it somehow" and "Shame Re-vow! Daily shows lose most" I would love to know what these words mean? Love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
