Oh Life!
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Comment from damevictoria
Help me out here Alcreator...what are you meaning wink it now? The form as always is right and the flow seems to fit. Just not to sure of the meaning.
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Help me out here Alcreator...what are you meaning wink it now? The form as always is right and the flow seems to fit. Just not to sure of the meaning.
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from Brantley88
Yep, like I thought, another one I missed. You must have written these while I was in the hospital. I'll try to keep going back. With luck, I will catch up on all of my reviews. This one was another good one.
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Yep, like I thought, another one I missed. You must have written these while I was in the hospital. I'll try to keep going back. With luck, I will catch up on all of my reviews. This one was another good one.
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from lkdunny
A quick read that takes longer to understand. A re-read was needed for this one. So many new styles to read. Your notes did help, but if there were no notes I may have been lost. This was interesting for sure. Keep up the interesting and good writing, lkdunny
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A quick read that takes longer to understand. A re-read was needed for this one. So many new styles to read. Your notes did help, but if there were no notes I may have been lost. This was interesting for sure. Keep up the interesting and good writing, lkdunny
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from thechair
I have no idea what you are talking about here. At all. But it seems to work out anyway. It sounds nice, is what I am trying to say.
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I have no idea what you are talking about here. At all. But it seems to work out anyway. It sounds nice, is what I am trying to say.
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from Airmid
Alcreator, another good tanka that you have here. It is hard to get a strong message within these sometime but you have done it :) Nicely done.
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Alcreator, another good tanka that you have here. It is hard to get a strong message within these sometime but you have done it :) Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from sengwriter
AW,
Yes it's so true almost in all our lives, just think of all sily odd things of utility - scissiors or a stapler. Kept so carefully that in need of all these things we have to wink but remembering it is very difficult - very difficult to find a trace of them.
A nice Tanka on a very common topic - a natural phenomenon.
Gautam
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AW,
Yes it's so true almost in all our lives, just think of all sily odd things of utility - scissiors or a stapler. Kept so carefully that in need of all these things we have to wink but remembering it is very difficult - very difficult to find a trace of them.
A nice Tanka on a very common topic - a natural phenomenon.
Gautam
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from Georgina Lenty
I like this one. I must admit, your notes after the verse did help me to understand it better - thanks! Short, yet you get the message through. Keep up the great work!
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I like this one. I must admit, your notes after the verse did help me to understand it better - thanks! Short, yet you get the message through. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from MikeSamford
TANKA (TAHNG-kuh)
The classic form of Japanese poetry with five unrhymed lines of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables to produce a concentrated essence of a single event, image or mood. I find your to be a very pleasant read and a good example of the form.
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TANKA (TAHNG-kuh)
The classic form of Japanese poetry with five unrhymed lines of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables to produce a concentrated essence of a single event, image or mood. I find your to be a very pleasant read and a good example of the form.
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from Beatlegirl61
Ok...I'll give you that!1 Lol's i really enjoyeed yor tanka and thought you did a great job getting your points across with a short amount of wordage...
Nicely written and fun to read....
Take care, be well and peace!! Carol ::))
'beatle' qutoe today: "First you must learn to smile as you kill...if you want to be like the folks on the hill..." (John Lennon)
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Ok...I'll give you that!1 Lol's i really enjoyeed yor tanka and thought you did a great job getting your points across with a short amount of wordage...
Nicely written and fun to read....
Take care, be well and peace!! Carol ::))
'beatle' qutoe today: "First you must learn to smile as you kill...if you want to be like the folks on the hill..." (John Lennon)
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from GRSaine
Hi ALCREATOR WRITER,
Your tanka,"Really", is really an interesting piece of work. Maybe it is a justification for the way we often act, or if not a justification at least an excuse. But, as some great writer once said, "To err is human".
GRSaine
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Hi ALCREATOR WRITER,
Your tanka,"Really", is really an interesting piece of work. Maybe it is a justification for the way we often act, or if not a justification at least an excuse. But, as some great writer once said, "To err is human".
GRSaine
Comment Written 29-May-2006
