Oh Life!
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Comment from justatuna
I understand your author's notes. Again, I appreciate your passion, but you're making no sense. Maybe that's your point, but just writing words has no real meaning. Of course it could be argued that words have no real meaning other than that which we give them. Just sounds caught in time measured by thought. Is that what you're trying to say?
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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I understand your author's notes. Again, I appreciate your passion, but you're making no sense. Maybe that's your point, but just writing words has no real meaning. Of course it could be argued that words have no real meaning other than that which we give them. Just sounds caught in time measured by thought. Is that what you're trying to say?
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from ravenblack
find the hidden word? i'm stuck trying to find the meaning. "later! wink it now"- is this wink code, like, see how clever? a bit too clever as , well, it is pretty-much indecipherable. summons day- produce or use things again day- do that every day. "daily shows lose most" - hey, I like john stewart!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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find the hidden word? i'm stuck trying to find the meaning. "later! wink it now"- is this wink code, like, see how clever? a bit too clever as , well, it is pretty-much indecipherable. summons day- produce or use things again day- do that every day. "daily shows lose most" - hey, I like john stewart!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello there Al
I am confused by your writing. a good man is not goodman. I don't know if it is your grasp of English that gets in the way, but your style is confusing and feels ragged
Bear
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Hello there Al
I am confused by your writing. a good man is not goodman. I don't know if it is your grasp of English that gets in the way, but your style is confusing and feels ragged
Bear
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from dmt1967
When trust is lost its a bad thing I can relate to that very good poem the picture shows despair I think it is a very good drawing thank you for sharing
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When trust is lost its a bad thing I can relate to that very good poem the picture shows despair I think it is a very good drawing thank you for sharing
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from gene roush
I really like
"I think to relate"
and
"'Oh here,' trust my heart. "
But no matter how arduous my struggle with it you lose me with the rest.
I think you need to give more and demand less with this one.
Thanks for sharing,
Gene
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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I really like
"I think to relate"
and
"'Oh here,' trust my heart. "
But no matter how arduous my struggle with it you lose me with the rest.
I think you need to give more and demand less with this one.
Thanks for sharing,
Gene
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from GracieAnn
This is original and has layers of meaning that is not forthcoming to a degree. The definitions helped some. When you ask where is that, it seems to make more sense to say where is it, the day. Wink it is to say ignore in procrastination? Clarification is needed for the reader. To be obtuse in writing detracts from its impact on the reader.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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This is original and has layers of meaning that is not forthcoming to a degree. The definitions helped some. When you ask where is that, it seems to make more sense to say where is it, the day. Wink it is to say ignore in procrastination? Clarification is needed for the reader. To be obtuse in writing detracts from its impact on the reader.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from twowheels
I would like to be able to give it more stars, since you are trying to express something so deep. Thing is, the connections between concepts are so deep between for such small words to contain. It needs so much backstory and explanation to get it...
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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I would like to be able to give it more stars, since you are trying to express something so deep. Thing is, the connections between concepts are so deep between for such small words to contain. It needs so much backstory and explanation to get it...
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from beccabootie123
should have know this was written by you. you have a distinctive style. well done and formatted. love to read the book. inspiring.
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should have know this was written by you. you have a distinctive style. well done and formatted. love to read the book. inspiring.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi..I didn't quite catch the detail as to what we might need to produce again. Is it a tangible object or intangible wit perhaps both? The re-vow shame part was a bit vague for me too. Cheers.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Hi..I didn't quite catch the detail as to what we might need to produce again. Is it a tangible object or intangible wit perhaps both? The re-vow shame part was a bit vague for me too. Cheers.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Bill Schott
There seems to be a lot of regional jargon in this poem that does not automatically pop into a reader's lexicon of words. 'Goodman'. Is that a particular kind of person?
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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There seems to be a lot of regional jargon in this poem that does not automatically pop into a reader's lexicon of words. 'Goodman'. Is that a particular kind of person?
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for good quest review
