Oh Life!
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Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
I THINK here, you are talking about those who say they will re-read your writing and come back later, to review, and never do? Shame on those who 'promise' and never return.
Also- you need to make some changes to your new 'Profile' information- you say...
A upublishable writer (An unpublished writer) has to discover wise publishable writers.
You are saying that you are 'unpublishable', which means that your writings will never be worthy of publishing? Don't think you MEANT to say that. Are you searching for good publishable writers...or for a good Publisher? I think it would be a good publisher you seek.
Thanks, Betty
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I THINK here, you are talking about those who say they will re-read your writing and come back later, to review, and never do? Shame on those who 'promise' and never return.
Also- you need to make some changes to your new 'Profile' information- you say...
A upublishable writer (An unpublished writer) has to discover wise publishable writers.
You are saying that you are 'unpublishable', which means that your writings will never be worthy of publishing? Don't think you MEANT to say that. Are you searching for good publishable writers...or for a good Publisher? I think it would be a good publisher you seek.
Thanks, Betty
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey Dear, good to see you've promoted another one. This is a pretty good tanka my dear one. It's interesting to see how many reviewers from seven years ago 2006 aren't members any more, so I did enjoy that journey through the past. Hope you are having a wonderful day.
Gloria
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Hey Dear, good to see you've promoted another one. This is a pretty good tanka my dear one. It's interesting to see how many reviewers from seven years ago 2006 aren't members any more, so I did enjoy that journey through the past. Hope you are having a wonderful day.
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from adewpearl
shame/re/vow/dail/y/shows/lose/most - that final line is 8 syllables instead of 7
what does wink it now somehow mean? I like the internal rhyme
I don't understand what daily shows are and why they lose, let alone lose most?
Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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shame/re/vow/dail/y/shows/lose/most - that final line is 8 syllables instead of 7
what does wink it now somehow mean? I like the internal rhyme
I don't understand what daily shows are and why they lose, let alone lose most?
Brooke
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from FLutterodt
Interesting style of poetry. I this a new style created by you? I is nice to ready something different from the usual. I like the simplicity and the picture that enhances the writing
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Interesting style of poetry. I this a new style created by you? I is nice to ready something different from the usual. I like the simplicity and the picture that enhances the writing
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from Treischel
Within the wink of an eye, we think . We forget our vows, but are forgiven. And the cycle starts anew. We make a promise, break it. Try to be better next time.
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Within the wink of an eye, we think . We forget our vows, but are forgiven. And the cycle starts anew. We make a promise, break it. Try to be better next time.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from muezza56
hidden words are many, i found 3, presumably only one counts, which one i wonder? 'elate', 'mere' or 'monday', of course all 3 may be wrong or'loss' distracted by word search-really well written prose,really!
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hidden words are many, i found 3, presumably only one counts, which one i wonder? 'elate', 'mere' or 'monday', of course all 3 may be wrong or'loss' distracted by word search-really well written prose,really!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from jppoet
Sorry, I don^t follow it at all. No such thing as an "independent chapter in a book". Book chapters are interrelated. There are more footnotes to this nonsensical
narration than there is of text and from WHERE derive their Sources? The Koran, The Bible?? Else? You can do better than this.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Sorry, I don^t follow it at all. No such thing as an "independent chapter in a book". Book chapters are interrelated. There are more footnotes to this nonsensical
narration than there is of text and from WHERE derive their Sources? The Koran, The Bible?? Else? You can do better than this.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of working the readers brain. The writer takes the reader on an interesting journey of words. Quick question, the mystery word is found through the capital letters right?
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The writer does a good job of working the readers brain. The writer takes the reader on an interesting journey of words. Quick question, the mystery word is found through the capital letters right?
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from prayingpoet
I see words, but most make little to no sense. I do not see hidden words. I appreciate your effort and I appreciate the 1.27 you are generously handing out.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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I see words, but most make little to no sense. I do not see hidden words. I appreciate your effort and I appreciate the 1.27 you are generously handing out.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from simplyteresa
I liked the timing you chose to use with this poem. I find that I usually read your work two or three times to get a deeper meaning rather than just a fleeting thought at the first read.
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I liked the timing you chose to use with this poem. I find that I usually read your work two or three times to get a deeper meaning rather than just a fleeting thought at the first read.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
