Strength from Within
a 3-5-3 entry11 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
a 3-5-3 entry
Strength from Within
by June Sargent
3-5-3 Contest Winner
Hello, June,
Congratulations on the first place win. A very nice 3/5/3 poem. Good syllable count. I like the presentation. The lines are connected grammatically with great flow. Well done my friend.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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a 3-5-3 entry
Strength from Within
by June Sargent
3-5-3 Contest Winner
Hello, June,
Congratulations on the first place win. A very nice 3/5/3 poem. Good syllable count. I like the presentation. The lines are connected grammatically with great flow. Well done my friend.
Gypsy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your support!
Comment from BeasPeas
Well written and illustrated. Since we have no choice in many matters, we have to endure until it's over. Best of luck in the contest with this timely entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Well written and illustrated. Since we have no choice in many matters, we have to endure until it's over. Best of luck in the contest with this timely entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Strength from Within, has the proper formatting and suggests, I believe, that pressure builds endurance and that plays out in all we do.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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This 3-5-3, Strength from Within, has the proper formatting and suggests, I believe, that pressure builds endurance and that plays out in all we do.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from samandlancelot
I think we go through many changes as our trials go into overtime. By the time we reach the ending, we are a new person if we let the fire burn up the bad and bring out the best in us.
I love it!
Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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I think we go through many changes as our trials go into overtime. By the time we reach the ending, we are a new person if we let the fire burn up the bad and bring out the best in us.
I love it!
Patricia
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These simple words have such great meaning and I enjoyed your thoughts here and your 3-5-3 has to be a winner, much enjoyed, perfect accompanying artwork too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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These simple words have such great meaning and I enjoyed your thoughts here and your 3-5-3 has to be a winner, much enjoyed, perfect accompanying artwork too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Glad this piece resonated with you. We all must draw on our inner strength at this time.
Comment from George Anderson
This is a good entry for the 3-5-3 syllable writing contest! And let us hope that our endurance brings out the best during these times ! Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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This is a good entry for the 3-5-3 syllable writing contest! And let us hope that our endurance brings out the best during these times ! Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Joan E.
What a glorious, eye-catching artwork and title you have selected to represent "endurance"! I enjoyed your wonderful wish in this 3-5-3. Here's to a great outcome in the contest as well. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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What a glorious, eye-catching artwork and title you have selected to represent "endurance"! I enjoyed your wonderful wish in this 3-5-3. Here's to a great outcome in the contest as well. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Shauna Jones
The poem has a very encouraging and up-beat rhythm. The shades of purple and blue of the shell adds a peacefulness to the reading of the poem. The artwork fits the poem perfectly.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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The poem has a very encouraging and up-beat rhythm. The shades of purple and blue of the shell adds a peacefulness to the reading of the poem. The artwork fits the poem perfectly.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback and generous rating!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Good twist on the usual by your concatenation of endurance brings God's approval and adversity brings out the best (though surely not in all off us: perhaps say some of us (the standard says either the best OR the worst).
Cheers. LIZ Lovely art too.
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Good twist on the usual by your concatenation of endurance brings God's approval and adversity brings out the best (though surely not in all off us: perhaps say some of us (the standard says either the best OR the worst).
Cheers. LIZ Lovely art too.
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts.
Comment from kahpot
Very well said, yes we will endure and over come this latest attack on our life style, very well written and presented 3-5-3 poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Very well said, yes we will endure and over come this latest attack on our life style, very well written and presented 3-5-3 poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts.