Twining Vines
3/5/3 Contest Entry9 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is excellent. Of all the 3-5-3's I've read this one seems most perfect for the form to me. Illustrated beautifully and I can relate to the topic of the beautiful morning glories entwined with each other. Got my vote. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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This is excellent. Of all the 3-5-3's I've read this one seems most perfect for the form to me. Illustrated beautifully and I can relate to the topic of the beautiful morning glories entwined with each other. Got my vote. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review and the vote. You are very kind.
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Hi Gypsy. Got my vote. A really nice poem. Marilyn
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Twining Vines, has the proper formatting and finds the pretty and ugly side of these invasive vines that are protected by their cuteness.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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This 3-5-3, Twining Vines, has the proper formatting and finds the pretty and ugly side of these invasive vines that are protected by their cuteness.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaaaah, vines of beauty in just 10 syllables -- never smothering, only invitingly crowded - lol!! ;) Great job for the contest!! :) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Aaaaaah, vines of beauty in just 10 syllables -- never smothering, only invitingly crowded - lol!! ;) Great job for the contest!! :) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of Morning Glory vines.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of Morning Glory vines.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from kahpot
Your words here have certainly provided an image of their own with your descriptions-smothering- beautiful artwork, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Your words here have certainly provided an image of their own with your descriptions-smothering- beautiful artwork, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoy reading haiku verse and this is a good one. It captures a scene from nature in all its beauty then brings in the darker image (which can be interpreted as human or plant) where twining is smothering, overwhelming natural growth and individuality.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I enjoy reading haiku verse and this is a good one. It captures a scene from nature in all its beauty then brings in the darker image (which can be interpreted as human or plant) where twining is smothering, overwhelming natural growth and individuality.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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thank you very much for your review :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a beautiful picture to accompany your contest entry. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your last line is a great finish. I love morning glories even though they are weeds. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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What a beautiful picture to accompany your contest entry. Good job with the syllable count per line. Your last line is a great finish. I love morning glories even though they are weeds. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Jan, you are very kind.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightfully fresh--twining vines smothering. Did art inspire versa or vice versa? Reminds me of the tree vines which choke the trees they twine on--dozens, alas, in my yard. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Delightfully fresh--twining vines smothering. Did art inspire versa or vice versa? Reminds me of the tree vines which choke the trees they twine on--dozens, alas, in my yard. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Liz, I guess the picture helped me get in the mood then I did a bit of research.
Comment from Cindy Decker
Very nice poem. I liked the contrast between a blooming morning glory and its demise of smothering. Also, morning is a time of renewal and new beginnings. The irony of them dying is really poignant. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Very nice poem. I liked the contrast between a blooming morning glory and its demise of smothering. Also, morning is a time of renewal and new beginnings. The irony of them dying is really poignant. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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thank you very much, morning glory is a weed that smothers other plants. :)
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Than you for letting me know about the flowers. I really liked your poem.