Comment from John bailey

Excellent

thank you for sharing with me your story, for sharing your pain and this nightmare that has no end, God still talks to us in that quiet still voice as he spoke with Jason, I believe he talks to us all the time we just stopped listening, I pray that you find peace.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020

I'm on a dating site so I've been writing love songs.
(From old songs)
And, rewriting them of course.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Good

First, I am so sorry for your loss. I'm sure that kind of pain never goes away. Second, your poem was very moving, I just had a little trouble with
the flow.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020

No problem thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This one needs some music as the lyrics flow very well, and I can see the resemblance to that Madonna song, it would be great to come up with music, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020

I'm working on it.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky1024