Of Hearts and Heartaches
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Without You "Poems about falling in or out of love.
4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful offering of absence -- your words deliver a hint of loneliness and more in just 10 syllables -- great job for the contest!! :) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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A wonderful offering of absence -- your words deliver a hint of loneliness and more in just 10 syllables -- great job for the contest!! :) :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Apologies for getting back to you so late. I do appreciate the review and your kind words of encouragement.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. The art is a great pairing with your poignant words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. The art is a great pairing with your poignant words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Apologies for getting back to you so late. I do appreciate the review and the kind words of encouragement.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Short and sweet and love is still the winner -without you. I like the antagonism between dark and light, it brings mystery to the poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Short and sweet and love is still the winner -without you. I like the antagonism between dark and light, it brings mystery to the poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Apologies for getting back to you so late. I do appreciate the review and the kind words of encouragement.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Without You, has the right set up and finds that the strongest rays sometimes cannot penetrate the black chasm of despair.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This 3-5-3, Without You, has the right set up and finds that the strongest rays sometimes cannot penetrate the black chasm of despair.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Apologies for getting back to you so late. Week has been crazy. Appreciate the thoughtful review.