Gift of Dawn
5-7-5 Hope20 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nice. Don't you just love sunrise. Hope and faith for what the new day will bring. Nicely worded and illustrated. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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This is very nice. Don't you just love sunrise. Hope and faith for what the new day will bring. Nicely worded and illustrated. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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My favorite part of the day, I think... :) Thanx for the review, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely imagery--morning's first breath; sunlight shatters is striking and startling (sssseems we make a good alliteration team!) Nice work (what else is new?) Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Lovely imagery--morning's first breath; sunlight shatters is striking and startling (sssseems we make a good alliteration team!) Nice work (what else is new?) Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, LIZ -- your confidence in me is quite the 'boost' to my psyche this morning... a much needed one - THANK YOU!! :) Hope all's well over in your corner of the universe -- take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Light and dawn have always been a symbol of hope, of fear and anxiety being dismissed. Your moving poem appealingly conveys this theme. The artwork is lovely.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Light and dawn have always been a symbol of hope, of fear and anxiety being dismissed. Your moving poem appealingly conveys this theme. The artwork is lovely.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt.
This short piece tells of hope renewed at sunrise.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt.
This short piece tells of hope renewed at sunrise.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from samandlancelot
You have a beautiful presentation with the sunrise picture and idea of being reborn every morning, no matter what grip the nighttime has on us.
Nice.
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You have a beautiful presentation with the sunrise picture and idea of being reborn every morning, no matter what grip the nighttime has on us.
Nice.
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from May 1
Wow, I am impressed by how you can find such perfect vocabulary to paint a wonderful picture in the reader's mind. Also, I love how well the poem and image work together.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Wow, I am impressed by how you can find such perfect vocabulary to paint a wonderful picture in the reader's mind. Also, I love how well the poem and image work together.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the message of this. We have another day to either sink or swim, be hopeful, or hopeless. We have a choice to make a difference in our situation today no matter what it is. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I love the message of this. We have another day to either sink or swim, be hopeful, or hopeless. We have a choice to make a difference in our situation today no matter what it is. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent poem, author. There is something about an orange sunrise or sunset that I find most appealing as I expect we all do.
This is a fine entry into the hope contest and I wish you great luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Excellent poem, author. There is something about an orange sunrise or sunset that I find most appealing as I expect we all do.
This is a fine entry into the hope contest and I wish you great luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!
Comment from Minglement
This is a unique entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt. It is beautifully presented and focusses on a broad view of hope and reinforces that it is renewed with every new day. Well done good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is a unique entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt. It is beautifully presented and focusses on a broad view of hope and reinforces that it is renewed with every new day. Well done good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!
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My pleasure.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
5-7-5 Hope contest entry
Gift of Dawn
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful presentation/good syllable count/great connection between lines that facilitate flow throughout the poem. Well done.
gypsy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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5-7-5 Hope contest entry
Gift of Dawn
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful presentation/good syllable count/great connection between lines that facilitate flow throughout the poem. Well done.
gypsy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!