I'm Hoping
5-7-5 Hope poem.3 total reviews
Comment from samandlancelot
You have a good hope for healing that is shared by many. I think in your last line, you mean once again heal. That wouldn't work for your syllable count. Just a suggestion: world will heal again.
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You have a good hope for healing that is shared by many. I think in your last line, you mean once again heal. That wouldn't work for your syllable count. Just a suggestion: world will heal again.
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)
Comment from Monica Chaddick
I loved the artwork, and the essence of the poem. I had a small problem with the last line - it didn't seem to flow with the others. Otherwise, I really liked your poem.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I loved the artwork, and the essence of the poem. I had a small problem with the last line - it didn't seem to flow with the others. Otherwise, I really liked your poem.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thanks!