The Ripple Effect
Viewing comments for Prologue "The Sea Hag"A couple's tour about England takes many turns....
20 total reviews
Comment from terryangelo
Really nice piece on nature and its beauty. Did you fill your flask with life and love? Your imagery is beautiful, almost tender. Wonderful job.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2006
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Really nice piece on nature and its beauty. Did you fill your flask with life and love? Your imagery is beautiful, almost tender. Wonderful job.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2006
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2006
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Hi... I just saw your review... the first time in months.... and wanted to let you know I must have overlooked it... sorry... Thanks for the support with such a nice review .... bill
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Hi I just saw I had missed your review and I wanted to Thank You for your support and review ..... bill
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Hi I just saw I had missed your review and I wanted to Thank You for your support and review ..... bill
Comment from Mrs Jones
Hi Bill
Very nice poetry indeed. I like the form, it flowed well and I can find no errors.
"To sip the dew of flavors offered,
nurtured within rich pastures,
drawn from rushing pools,
where the base of the tree is sweet,.... stunning opening lines.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Hi Bill
Very nice poetry indeed. I like the form, it flowed well and I can find no errors.
"To sip the dew of flavors offered,
nurtured within rich pastures,
drawn from rushing pools,
where the base of the tree is sweet,.... stunning opening lines.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 08-Apr-2006
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Hi... I just saw your review... the first time in months.... and wanted to let you know I must have overlooked it... sorry... Thanks for the support with such a nice review .... bill
Comment from Swtdreamz
drawn from rushing pools,
where the base of the tree is sweet, - kind of reminds me of a swamp with trees or cactus for some reason- maybe the pool of water at its feet
There: before me lay a flask to be filled,
as I too, tip the open rim, - hmm flask- sounds like some ancient scene
good job
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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drawn from rushing pools,
where the base of the tree is sweet, - kind of reminds me of a swamp with trees or cactus for some reason- maybe the pool of water at its feet
There: before me lay a flask to be filled,
as I too, tip the open rim, - hmm flask- sounds like some ancient scene
good job
Comment Written 08-Apr-2006
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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Hi I just saw I had missed your review and I wanted to Thank You for your support and review ..... bill
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
An artistic poem envisioned unison of love
Very softly, freely in visuals worked out
A tale of unification chalked out
So nicely in poetic glamor
Above heart love
Whispering
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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An artistic poem envisioned unison of love
Very softly, freely in visuals worked out
A tale of unification chalked out
So nicely in poetic glamor
Above heart love
Whispering
Comment Written 08-Apr-2006
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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Hi I just saw I had missed your review and I wanted to Thank You for your support and review ..... bill
Comment from invisible~ink
Both the picture and the poem match. This poem carries a lot of feelings coupled in a way that provide great images. This is once agin another fine pieces of yours. ink
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Both the picture and the poem match. This poem carries a lot of feelings coupled in a way that provide great images. This is once agin another fine pieces of yours. ink
Comment Written 06-Apr-2006
Comment from Mastery
Fantastic! Really! Great stuff, Bill. You are a poet! I wish I could give you a six...but it is within last months writing, I'm afraid.. can only say I am so proud that I know you...Bob
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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Fantastic! Really! Great stuff, Bill. You are a poet! I wish I could give you a six...but it is within last months writing, I'm afraid.. can only say I am so proud that I know you...Bob
Comment Written 04-Apr-2006
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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Hi I just saw I had missed your review and I wanted to Thank You for your support and review ..... bill
Comment from AmokMuse
This was lovely. The setting you described, the emotions you shared, and the thread of sensuality that flowed through this was very moving. It was easy to place myself there, listening to the lovers. Thanks for this moving piece, I enjoyed it very much. Cyndee :-)
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2007
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This was lovely. The setting you described, the emotions you shared, and the thread of sensuality that flowed through this was very moving. It was easy to place myself there, listening to the lovers. Thanks for this moving piece, I enjoyed it very much. Cyndee :-)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2006
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2007
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Forgive me.. I just ran across your review and I want to thank you Kindly... I have been away from Fanstory for a long long time ... I just wrote something this week and slowly edge my way backin... Again I thank You for the Really nice review... Take care ... Bill
Comment from rivki1111
Hi, its rivki and I have just read your poem which I enjoyed very much. This was well written and the graphic really sets a great mood for the work initially. It is very appropriate to the sentiment within the work also.
Good word usage which makes for lovely imagery. Nothing to fix for me, so I gave it a five star rating. Thanks for sharing your work with me, I would definitely recommend this to other readers to review, cheers rivki
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2007
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Hi, its rivki and I have just read your poem which I enjoyed very much. This was well written and the graphic really sets a great mood for the work initially. It is very appropriate to the sentiment within the work also.
Good word usage which makes for lovely imagery. Nothing to fix for me, so I gave it a five star rating. Thanks for sharing your work with me, I would definitely recommend this to other readers to review, cheers rivki
Comment Written 04-Apr-2006
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2007
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Hi Rivki...Forgive me.. I just ran across your review and I want to thank you Kindly... I have been away from Fanstory for a long long time ... I just wrote something this week and slowly edge my way backin... Again I thank You for the Really nice review... Take care ... Bill
Comment from Kingsland
I will sigh, for amoment, a breath
needed and performaned in unison with life
those were two very outstanding lines in a very well written poem
this was my pleasure to read and review... John
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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I will sigh, for amoment, a breath
needed and performaned in unison with life
those were two very outstanding lines in a very well written poem
this was my pleasure to read and review... John
Comment Written 03-Apr-2006
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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Hi I just saw I had missed your review and I wanted to Thank You for your support and review ..... bill
Comment from Jewell McChesney
WOW!
Sensual, beautiful, appetizing...
Creates an ambiance of romance...
wanting a picnic under a willow tree with a sensual man.
Sipping wine and each other....
sigh...
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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WOW!
Sensual, beautiful, appetizing...
Creates an ambiance of romance...
wanting a picnic under a willow tree with a sensual man.
Sipping wine and each other....
sigh...
Comment Written 03-Apr-2006
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2006
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Hi I just saw I had missed your review and I wanted to Thank You for your support and review ..... bill