The Man Upon The Cross
A description of the crucifixion of Christ.25 total reviews
Comment from Cybertron1986
A lovely rendition of the greatest story ever told. I like the significance of this scene and what it foretells to the reader. Beautiful and appropriate presentation. Thank you for sharing this in these trying days. God Bless
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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A lovely rendition of the greatest story ever told. I like the significance of this scene and what it foretells to the reader. Beautiful and appropriate presentation. Thank you for sharing this in these trying days. God Bless
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I wrote this in 2004 but it never loses its truth.
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a beautifully written, powerful poem. A great rendition of how he gave his life so we could have eternal life in heaven. Something we always should remember. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This is a beautifully written, powerful poem. A great rendition of how he gave his life so we could have eternal life in heaven. Something we always should remember. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your compliments and for reviewing my poem. Stay safe and healthy!
Comment from MARIANNE GI
Very touching, especially these days that Easter approaches. The way you described his torture from beginning to end was so beautifully graphic, I enjoy reading it, congratulations
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Very touching, especially these days that Easter approaches. The way you described his torture from beginning to end was so beautifully graphic, I enjoy reading it, congratulations
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for your comments. I truly appreciate all reviews of my work. Stay safe and healthy.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem is so meaningful. Loved reading it. To think that He died to save us from our sins, is truly unreal. There's no one on this earth with that much power. He is the Almighty.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Your poem is so meaningful. Loved reading it. To think that He died to save us from our sins, is truly unreal. There's no one on this earth with that much power. He is the Almighty.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your feedback. God bless you! Stay safe and healthy!
Comment from jaylar
This is a nice poem that serves as a reminder of the ultimate sacrifice, however I didn't sense anything new in it. When it comes to this subject, it has been told and retold so many times. I would have liked to have experienced it in a new way, with some solid imagery incorporated, something to make me feel something about it.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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This is a nice poem that serves as a reminder of the ultimate sacrifice, however I didn't sense anything new in it. When it comes to this subject, it has been told and retold so many times. I would have liked to have experienced it in a new way, with some solid imagery incorporated, something to make me feel something about it.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your feedback. I truly appreciate your comments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful contest offering of profession of faith in free verse format that shares the story of Good Friday with all -- best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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A beautiful contest offering of profession of faith in free verse format that shares the story of Good Friday with all -- best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A description of the crucifixion of Christ.
The Man Upon The Cross
by Monica Chaddick
Hello, Monica,
A very descriptive poem about the crucifixion of Jesus Christ. The presentation is nice but a bit hard to read. Maybe if you change the color of the font.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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A description of the crucifixion of Christ.
The Man Upon The Cross
by Monica Chaddick
Hello, Monica,
A very descriptive poem about the crucifixion of Jesus Christ. The presentation is nice but a bit hard to read. Maybe if you change the color of the font.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thanks for your comments and feedback. I will try to make it easier to read.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's easy to forget someone died for us with everything going on in the world around us. This is a good reminder of how loved we are, how we're not alone, and someone is always there for us. Great job
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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It's easy to forget someone died for us with everything going on in the world around us. This is a good reminder of how loved we are, how we're not alone, and someone is always there for us. Great job
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The Eternal Sacrifice of the Lamb. All prophecies before this happening pointed to a Messiah that was coming. Yet, when He came so many denied Him. But, those of us that receive The Word, have Eternal Hope.
Your poem is artful and well composed with the story of Jesus. A lovely entry for this contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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The Eternal Sacrifice of the Lamb. All prophecies before this happening pointed to a Messiah that was coming. Yet, when He came so many denied Him. But, those of us that receive The Word, have Eternal Hope.
Your poem is artful and well composed with the story of Jesus. A lovely entry for this contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your compliments and feedback.
Comment from Ben1
This is a good poem about Jesus Christ. It is truly a tragic story when you think about it, though in the end it brought a bunch of good. It is always though when you think about it that his main purpose in life was to die on the cross. Though he did bring a bunch of good to this world. Overall even without being the son of God Jesus was a pretty cool dude. He was even the savior. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is a good poem about Jesus Christ. It is truly a tragic story when you think about it, though in the end it brought a bunch of good. It is always though when you think about it that his main purpose in life was to die on the cross. Though he did bring a bunch of good to this world. Overall even without being the son of God Jesus was a pretty cool dude. He was even the savior. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your feedback.
