Our Tree
We love our maple tree that shades our home3 total reviews
Comment from samandlancelot
How many of those brittle branches will survive the freezing winter air. Hurry, hurry spring, before I break. Oh, yeah it's here today, and the branches survived.
I like it.
Patricia
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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How many of those brittle branches will survive the freezing winter air. Hurry, hurry spring, before I break. Oh, yeah it's here today, and the branches survived.
I like it.
Patricia
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thanks much for your read and feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective,
as well as the alliteration.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the freezing winter.
-A good concluding line
that shows the hope for summer.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective,
as well as the alliteration.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the freezing winter.
-A good concluding line
that shows the hope for summer.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your read, review and encouraging words.
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You are welcome.
Comment from RodG
The Speaker here sees her tree as a symbol of hope, knowing its "bare brittle branches" will be budding with leaves soon. I like your use of alliteration and internal rhyme. Rod
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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The Speaker here sees her tree as a symbol of hope, knowing its "bare brittle branches" will be budding with leaves soon. I like your use of alliteration and internal rhyme. Rod
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your read, review and encouraging words. I like the idea of hope. Maybe it fits with the sweeping virus.
