"Heart Spoken Moments"
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow... a very melancholic offering that is laced and woven with strands of loneliness and more... :( If this is but the prologue, the book may certainly be almost depressing.... :( Good luck with the chapters!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Wow... a very melancholic offering that is laced and woven with strands of loneliness and more... :( If this is but the prologue, the book may certainly be almost depressing.... :( Good luck with the chapters!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I aim to please and it's been a battle close to five days since I posted that book.
So, I have to add to it.
Thanks Yvette.
Ricky
Comment from Fonda Little
Mistake I found, "'As, if b2oulder's being blown and castaway!'" change b2oulder's to boulder's
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Psalm 34:18 New Living Translation (NLT)
18 The Lord is close to the brokenhearted;
he rescues those whose spirits are crushed.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Mistake I found, "'As, if b2oulder's being blown and castaway!'" change b2oulder's to boulder's
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Psalm 34:18 New Living Translation (NLT)
18 The Lord is close to the brokenhearted;
he rescues those whose spirits are crushed.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Thanks for the grammar problem and also for the religious statement.
Much appreciated Miss Donna Little.
Ricky