My Lucky Leprechaun
The stuff that Irish legends are made of...18 total reviews
Comment from May 1
That is so fun to read. I love the descriptions and the rhythm of this poem. Also, the rhymes work perfectly. Beautiful ending. All in all, reading this poem was really fun.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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That is so fun to read. I love the descriptions and the rhythm of this poem. Also, the rhymes work perfectly. Beautiful ending. All in all, reading this poem was really fun.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Too bad this one's a fantasy, yeah?! ;) :) lol! Thanx for the review, May! ;) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your narrative poem is creatively and skillfully written, well-plotted with vividly specific details, and delightful. I like the way it rollicks along with
imagination and enthusiasm.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Your narrative poem is creatively and skillfully written, well-plotted with vividly specific details, and delightful. I like the way it rollicks along with
imagination and enthusiasm.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Too bad this one's a fantasy, yeah?! ;) :) lol! Thanx for the review, Janice! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. You have stumbled upon a very talented leprechaun that doesn't even need tools to do his job. That's quite interesting. Your rhyme and your meter is very good and this is a good one for the contest. Good luck.
Z. {°â??°}
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Hello Yvette. You have stumbled upon a very talented leprechaun that doesn't even need tools to do his job. That's quite interesting. Your rhyme and your meter is very good and this is a good one for the contest. Good luck.
Z. {°â??°}
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Yeah... too bad this one's a fantasy, yeah?! ;) :) Thanx for the review, Z! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This made me smile and smiling is a good thing to do nowadays with everything going on in the world. You did a great job with this and I wouldn't change a thing.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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This made me smile and smiling is a good thing to do nowadays with everything going on in the world. You did a great job with this and I wouldn't change a thing.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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If you smiled then my mission was accomplished!! ;) Thanx for stopping by for me and my Lucky guy! ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Oh! Send that little guy my way! I neeeeed him here! I do I do I really really do!!! Author, I just love this entry! You should do very well... May the luck of the Irish be with ye! ;)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Oh! Send that little guy my way! I neeeeed him here! I do I do I really really do!!! Author, I just love this entry! You should do very well... May the luck of the Irish be with ye! ;)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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LOL!! I had fun with this one -- glad you did, too. It was one of those that I started with one thing in mind and ended up with another once I got about halfway through... ;) :):) Thank you, THANK YOU!! ;) Hey!! Check out the crazy blonde teacher:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uqoF4yvDs50&feature=youtu.be
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I added your youtube to my favorites so I can show my son... I'll pull it up on my phone for my dad. I wonder what he'll think of the crazy blonde lady? I love the butterfly clip in your hair! :)
Comment from Louise Michelle
You did such a nice job with this writing challenge. I loved your entire presentation, from the green background against your text to the content. We all could use a little magic now and your poem fit the bill. Made me smile. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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You did such a nice job with this writing challenge. I loved your entire presentation, from the green background against your text to the content. We all could use a little magic now and your poem fit the bill. Made me smile. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Smiles are my goal -- so mission accomplished! Thank you for your review!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the "A Lucky Leprechaun Poem" contest.
This well written verse tells of a Leprechaun handy man and the house at rainbow's end.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the "A Lucky Leprechaun Poem" contest.
This well written verse tells of a Leprechaun handy man and the house at rainbow's end.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Many thanks, Sharon.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Awwwwwww! A wee bit 'o romantic tale for this contest, and well told! (*'tis grinnin' I am, and will be for the day!) Best of luck in the contest, though I doubt you'll be needing it! *wink*/*smile*
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Awwwwwww! A wee bit 'o romantic tale for this contest, and well told! (*'tis grinnin' I am, and will be for the day!) Best of luck in the contest, though I doubt you'll be needing it! *wink*/*smile*
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!!
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:) You're quite welcome.
Comment from nancyjam
I really enjoyed your sweet and fun Leprechaun poem.
The rhymes are great and the meter strong for a smooth
read.
The images are fun too! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed your sweet and fun Leprechaun poem.
The rhymes are great and the meter strong for a smooth
read.
The images are fun too! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, Nancy!
Comment from RShipp
"I've yet to see a tool...not one!
This little 'glowy' light appears,
And then the problem disappears!"
My favorite part.
Best of luck with the "A Lucky Leprechaun Poem" contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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"I've yet to see a tool...not one!
This little 'glowy' light appears,
And then the problem disappears!"
My favorite part.
Best of luck with the "A Lucky Leprechaun Poem" contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much -- glowy is a word, right? LOL!
