Revelations of Age
Would that we could always hold on to the fairies...52 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Light and whimiscial and yet thought provoking because we all want to use our imagination and yet reality comes through. Very well done and strong for the contest
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Light and whimiscial and yet thought provoking because we all want to use our imagination and yet reality comes through. Very well done and strong for the contest
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Barb -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Fairies are delightful figments of the imagination when we are in a dreamy state. I have become The Good Tooth Fairy. I drop into the dreamy state, and out flows an A4 page letter to my current "lost a tooth child". I see my fairy self clear as a bell...
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Fairies are delightful figments of the imagination when we are in a dreamy state. I have become The Good Tooth Fairy. I drop into the dreamy state, and out flows an A4 page letter to my current "lost a tooth child". I see my fairy self clear as a bell...
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Rebecca -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
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You have a hard row to hoe, but just keep plugging away. All your hard work might come in handy one day. Make backups...
Comment from Sally Law
Mine eyes are a telling me untruths these days. I saw that I looked younger yesterday, but alas, it twas me fairies' dust! Sending you my best today as always and Happy St. Patrick's Day!
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Mine eyes are a telling me untruths these days. I saw that I looked younger yesterday, but alas, it twas me fairies' dust! Sending you my best today as always and Happy St. Patrick's Day!
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Lady Sal, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Yvette, this is a perfect Cinquain in perfect form. Your content is lovely and a strong contender for the contest - Good Luck and warm regards - Dorothy xx
Actually 'there are fairies at the bottom of my garden' LOL!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Hello Yvette, this is a perfect Cinquain in perfect form. Your content is lovely and a strong contender for the contest - Good Luck and warm regards - Dorothy xx
Actually 'there are fairies at the bottom of my garden' LOL!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Dorothy -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Revelations of Age, has the proper formatting and may be sadly sighting that the fantasies of infancy are at some point shown to us as the finite life available to dreamers. Watch the fire little moth.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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This cinquain, Revelations of Age, has the proper formatting and may be sadly sighting that the fantasies of infancy are at some point shown to us as the finite life available to dreamers. Watch the fire little moth.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Bill, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain about the childhood fairies flitting around the candlelight become the pesky moths when we are grown-up. We cannot see the real fairies anymore.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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A very well-written Cinquain about the childhood fairies flitting around the candlelight become the pesky moths when we are grown-up. We cannot see the real fairies anymore.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet majestic and magical write Yvette and these moths play with the fire and sometimes get burnt by it! I loved your muse working here thinking they could be fairies, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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This is a sweet majestic and magical write Yvette and these moths play with the fire and sometimes get burnt by it! I loved your muse working here thinking they could be fairies, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. You did a great job on the cinquain poem. As I read the poem and the description of the fairies I was waiting for something other than the irony of the last two words. Nice job.
Good luck in the contest.
Z (*_*)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Hello Yvette. You did a great job on the cinquain poem. As I read the poem and the description of the fairies I was waiting for something other than the irony of the last two words. Nice job.
Good luck in the contest.
Z (*_*)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Z, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
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Hey Yvette. YOU'RE WELCOME.
I was an optimist myself. HAHAHAHA
Comment from Debbie Pope
Sometimes I see angels, Yvette. Even as a child, I never saw a fairy. That shows how special your imagination is. You can let go of reality better than anyone that I know.
This is a sweet one.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Sometimes I see angels, Yvette. Even as a child, I never saw a fairy. That shows how special your imagination is. You can let go of reality better than anyone that I know.
This is a sweet one.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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That's so wonderful, Debbie -- sometimes they're there and sometimes not.... think it's a mood thing, yeah?! ;) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed how you took us into a magical realm and back to reality in the brevity of a cinquain poem! Great use of alliteration especially of words that begin with "f"! Best to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Enjoyed how you took us into a magical realm and back to reality in the brevity of a cinquain poem! Great use of alliteration especially of words that begin with "f"! Best to you in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You so rock, Helen, just because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
