Revelations of Age
Would that we could always hold on to the fairies...52 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Vette,
It's okay, I won't tell. (Though I have a weird feeling word may be getting out somehow...?)
Mainly because I have my own eccentricities -- I know! Shocked, are you?
Well, take a breath. It's true.
This was fun. Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Vette,
It's okay, I won't tell. (Though I have a weird feeling word may be getting out somehow...?)
Mainly because I have my own eccentricities -- I know! Shocked, are you?
Well, take a breath. It's true.
This was fun. Good luck!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Robyn -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from tfawcus
Your cinquain captures that element of regret that comes with growing up and finding the mundane in what we used, as children, to find magical. Those who can retain some of the magic in their adult lives and in their writing are truly blessed.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Your cinquain captures that element of regret that comes with growing up and finding the mundane in what we used, as children, to find magical. Those who can retain some of the magic in their adult lives and in their writing are truly blessed.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Tony!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your "fairies" with us in this uplifting cinquain. I admired your substantive title--writers of cinquains often forget how important it is. I enjoyed your intensifying the verse with your use of alliteration and your unexpected conclusion. A sure winner! Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your "fairies" with us in this uplifting cinquain. I admired your substantive title--writers of cinquains often forget how important it is. I enjoyed your intensifying the verse with your use of alliteration and your unexpected conclusion. A sure winner! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Joan -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
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I can certainly understand your time demands. I take continuing education classes through Emeritus College and they hope to be on-line next week. Be well and know this too shall pass- Joan
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review! ;)
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You're welcome!
Comment from Patty Palmer
A poem for the contest! I love the concept of the fairies flying around the fire until it's realized they are merely moths attracted to the light of the fire. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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A poem for the contest! I love the concept of the fairies flying around the fire until it's realized they are merely moths attracted to the light of the fire. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Patty -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Alas, the revelations of age aren't quite as fun as the imaginings of our youth. Your Cinquain brought many of those youthful memories, fluttering back to me. Thank you and God bless you with your entry.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Alas, the revelations of age aren't quite as fun as the imaginings of our youth. Your Cinquain brought many of those youthful memories, fluttering back to me. Thank you and God bless you with your entry.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Frank, much appreciated!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from estory
a cute little piece of optical illusion. But those moths can be fairy like, and some have their own beauty, a frail kind of ephemeral beauty. Very colorful with nice musical touches estory
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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a cute little piece of optical illusion. But those moths can be fairy like, and some have their own beauty, a frail kind of ephemeral beauty. Very colorful with nice musical touches estory
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, E -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The old expression "Perception is everything" holds a great deal of truth!
It's like those "shooting stars" that aren't even stars. Your cinquain is lovely and moving.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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The old expression "Perception is everything" holds a great deal of truth!
It's like those "shooting stars" that aren't even stars. Your cinquain is lovely and moving.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much for the review, Janice -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the poetry contest Yvette. It was short, it was sweet and a delight to read. I do so agree that fairies would be nice to see rather than moths. But we can always believe, can't we?
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Good luck in the poetry contest Yvette. It was short, it was sweet and a delight to read. I do so agree that fairies would be nice to see rather than moths. But we can always believe, can't we?
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Alie, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Fables have their place in our lives. They teach us to dream of miracles and "they lived happily ever after" stories. So what's a fairy or two, here and there. Sometimes things seem to be manipulated in such a way that is "Fairylike" and I accept that.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Fables have their place in our lives. They teach us to dream of miracles and "they lived happily ever after" stories. So what's a fairy or two, here and there. Sometimes things seem to be manipulated in such a way that is "Fairylike" and I accept that.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Rafy, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
