Because I Love You
Free verse contest. An outburst of love15 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
I do like the mood of this poem throughout its great simple way of loving its surrounding natural world that with a simple middle switch in each cinquain turns than towards human beloved in every stanzaic last verse of the well beautiful written poem. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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I do like the mood of this poem throughout its great simple way of loving its surrounding natural world that with a simple middle switch in each cinquain turns than towards human beloved in every stanzaic last verse of the well beautiful written poem. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Tony, thanks a lot!
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You are Always welcomed. Blessings. Tony
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::))
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Finding true love is the best. I broke my foot and I've had to ask my husband to do things for me I never thought I'd ever have to ask him. True love and survive anything. Great job
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Finding true love is the best. I broke my foot and I've had to ask my husband to do things for me I never thought I'd ever have to ask him. True love and survive anything. Great job
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you, for this nice review.
Comment from Puzzle
I love this poem. If someone before this for me I would think it was the greatest thing in the world. I like how you relate love to a summers day verse by verse. Just that all around warm happy feeling.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I love this poem. If someone before this for me I would think it was the greatest thing in the world. I like how you relate love to a summers day verse by verse. Just that all around warm happy feeling.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Puzzle, this is such a kind, nice review. Thank you very much.
Comment from samandlancelot
You selected a beautiful picture to complement your words.
I like your repeated "because I love you."
I like the somersaults by happy birds.
summersaults (somersaults) by happy birds
I like how nature comes to life because "I love you."
Patricia
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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You selected a beautiful picture to complement your words.
I like your repeated "because I love you."
I like the somersaults by happy birds.
summersaults (somersaults) by happy birds
I like how nature comes to life because "I love you."
Patricia
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Patricia, that is a nice review. Thank you.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Love sees all the little things, the magic things of the land and sea. Love notices the tactics of God's creatures and sees love. Happy is the person who can rise above troubles, and look for signs of love. After all, love makes the world go around.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Love sees all the little things, the magic things of the land and sea. Love notices the tactics of God's creatures and sees love. Happy is the person who can rise above troubles, and look for signs of love. After all, love makes the world go around.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Rebecca, thank you so much. At the moment love and Corona are fighting who makes the world go around, but I am convinced that Love will win.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
All things are possible when there is love and here you say so many things are happening because of your love. The endless things that are positive array our lives when we are in love. A lovely lilting and artful poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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All things are possible when there is love and here you say so many things are happening because of your love. The endless things that are positive array our lives when we are in love. A lovely lilting and artful poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Raffaelina, thank you very much. Nice review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Free verse contest. An outburst of love
Because I Love You
Hello my friend
Beautiful free verse for the contest. Nice presentation.
I love the beach and your poem reminds me of it. I like the analogy with the bee.
Good job.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Free verse contest. An outburst of love
Because I Love You
Hello my friend
Beautiful free verse for the contest. Nice presentation.
I love the beach and your poem reminds me of it. I like the analogy with the bee.
Good job.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse love poem. When we have that special person in our lives everything around us seem brighter and more beautiful than ever before.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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A very well-written free verse love poem. When we have that special person in our lives everything around us seem brighter and more beautiful than ever before.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Yes, Sandra. Thank you. So true.
Comment from Billie Jo Dess
Very sweet, though the symbolism of the worker bee and his queen was quite poignant as they tend to work themselves to death for her. Love in its truest form many times and ways involves sacrifice and you have in your own way written that into your work here.
Billie Jo
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Very sweet, though the symbolism of the worker bee and his queen was quite poignant as they tend to work themselves to death for her. Love in its truest form many times and ways involves sacrifice and you have in your own way written that into your work here.
Billie Jo
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Billie Jo, thank you so much for your review. Appreciated!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice comparison to the bee and honey bee that personifies the perfect love. I love the image that the seagull shimmers in the air. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Nice comparison to the bee and honey bee that personifies the perfect love. I love the image that the seagull shimmers in the air. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Iza, thank you for your nice review.
