Memories Remembered
Reminiscing72 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Linda, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about your memories for the past. To me this is a six star poem my friend. You used very good descriptive words and very heart felt words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. May God bless you! love, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Linda, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem about your memories for the past. To me this is a six star poem my friend. You used very good descriptive words and very heart felt words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. May God bless you! love, Teri
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hi Teri, so good to see you my wonderful friend...thank you so much for a wonderful review...and for all your lovely stars...I hope you and Tom are doing well...take care and stay safe...put this virus in Gods hands...and He will protect us...God B;ess you as well...much love beautiful angel...Linda xxoo
Comment from Mark Valentine
The last line makes the poem. All of us have good and bad memories (or as you so beautifully put it, some memories that are "tightly treasured" and some that are "unwanted". I think the test is - when we look back on the totality of our memories, can we smile, or do we cringe.
Your poem, and the wonderful illustration that accompanies it, speaks to the ultimate introspection - what did I do with my life? You use some wonderful phrases here - "mannequin of moments", "did I trip too many time to forgive?". It's a really beautiful and poignant poem.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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The last line makes the poem. All of us have good and bad memories (or as you so beautifully put it, some memories that are "tightly treasured" and some that are "unwanted". I think the test is - when we look back on the totality of our memories, can we smile, or do we cringe.
Your poem, and the wonderful illustration that accompanies it, speaks to the ultimate introspection - what did I do with my life? You use some wonderful phrases here - "mannequin of moments", "did I trip too many time to forgive?". It's a really beautiful and poignant poem.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Hi Mark, how are you my friend?...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment from crzypnter
Linda,
We all wonder could've, should've, would've at times and yes those moments in time mold us into who we are today. The times that make us smile and those that bring a tear. We can only put our trust in the lord and follow his path. God bless
August
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Linda,
We all wonder could've, should've, would've at times and yes those moments in time mold us into who we are today. The times that make us smile and those that bring a tear. We can only put our trust in the lord and follow his path. God bless
August
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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good morning August, always a pleasure to see my sweet friend...your so right...we have to trust in God...know He will take us down the right path...and good or bad... with the strongest love given...He has His reasons...
between eye surgery...and taking care of mom...I haven't written to much...I hope to get back to it...
thank you sweet guy for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...have a blessed Sunday day...God Bless you as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Sally Law
It's so good to see you, and such a fine poetry offering with your name. This is beautiful, Linda dear. I'm in a pondering mood today about life, memories, and so many things, too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Love,
Sal xoxoxo
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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It's so good to see you, and such a fine poetry offering with your name. This is beautiful, Linda dear. I'm in a pondering mood today about life, memories, and so many things, too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Love,
Sal xoxoxo
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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good morning Sally, so good to see you as well...mom is in rehab for one more day...so I thought I would try to write while I could...my eyes are doing much better...the one is still hanging in there...but is healing...lately I have been looking back on my past...wondering what I could have...or should done different...for the most...good or bad...there are very few things I would change...maybe just a couple...LOL...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...and you have a blessed Sunday day my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
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You failed to mention your eyes to me, mupy dear friend. I didn't realize our were having trouble. This comes back with healing prayers. As you k kw, Im near blind but continue to write. I think it's easier to write with a bit of eyesight than none. I'm so pleased this poem is doing so well. A testament to how much you are loved and missed, dearest Linda.
Love, Sal xoxoxo
Comment from reconciled
I think we all wonder sometimes...had I done this or hadn't I, would I have made the memory different. I suppose it hard to know for sure. I think a life without some regret just as impossible as one never experiencing being human. You penned a wonderful poem Linda. Love Michael
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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I think we all wonder sometimes...had I done this or hadn't I, would I have made the memory different. I suppose it hard to know for sure. I think a life without some regret just as impossible as one never experiencing being human. You penned a wonderful poem Linda. Love Michael
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hi Michael, sometimes I look back and wonder...what was I thinking...and other times I thank God for the treasured memories...thank you for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...have a blessed Sunday day...love you.. Linda xxoo
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a lovely poem about memories. I think all of us at some time or another wonder if we did the right thing. I didn't see any mistakes and you did an excellent job. Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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What a lovely poem about memories. I think all of us at some time or another wonder if we did the right thing. I didn't see any mistakes and you did an excellent job. Shirley
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hi Shirley, I think your right my sweet friend...thank you for a wonderful review...and have a blessed day...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from closetpoetjester
I am sure you travelled the only path you knew at the time my friend and whilst it may not have been by choice, it has moulded you into who you are today which seems to be a kind loving and compassionate individual. Just know that all the paths and roads you have travelled got you where you are now.
So many great lines in this but in particular I liked "mannequin of moments" That conjures up a gamut of thoughts.
Well done. This felt very personal. Thanks for sharing yourself like this. Sixer for you girl!
Hugs P xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I am sure you travelled the only path you knew at the time my friend and whilst it may not have been by choice, it has moulded you into who you are today which seems to be a kind loving and compassionate individual. Just know that all the paths and roads you have travelled got you where you are now.
So many great lines in this but in particular I liked "mannequin of moments" That conjures up a gamut of thoughts.
Well done. This felt very personal. Thanks for sharing yourself like this. Sixer for you girl!
Hugs P xxoo
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Hi Phillippa, thank you my beautiful friend for a wonderful review...and all your kind words...and all your lovely stars...I have been off for awhile...had to have a little eye surgery...one eye healed good...the other wants to put up a fight to heal...LOL...but it will in time...so have are you doing ?...I hope all is going well...just don't go outside...
it seem as I get older sweet girl...I find myself looking back on what once was...and hoping I did it right...knock on wood...LOL...thank you again you...and you are so welcome....much love to you...and the biggest hugs...xxoo
Comment from Bichon
Such a beautiful poem, dearest Linda. We all have those memories, some good and some bad. Perhaps we can relive them in our dreams. I hope you're doing well, haven't heard from you in a while x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Such a beautiful poem, dearest Linda. We all have those memories, some good and some bad. Perhaps we can relive them in our dreams. I hope you're doing well, haven't heard from you in a while x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hi Chloe, had my eye surgery...still healing...but much better...I can read short times...then I have to rest my eyes...
otherwise...all is well...I hope you are doing well also...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...God Bless my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from HarryT
I love this offering. It speaks so true of every journey one takes along the path of life. My only problem is the title. Memories Remembered is to my mind redundant. One cannot have memories if they are not remember, in my opinion. I would seek a different title. Love the picture, excellent structure and the poem flows well. It is so rewarding to be please with who you have become. I love your first stanza.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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I love this offering. It speaks so true of every journey one takes along the path of life. My only problem is the title. Memories Remembered is to my mind redundant. One cannot have memories if they are not remember, in my opinion. I would seek a different title. Love the picture, excellent structure and the poem flows well. It is so rewarding to be please with who you have become. I love your first stanza.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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HI Harry, thank you so much for a wonderful review...and for all the shinning stars...I went back and fourth on the title...thank you for your thoughts...love Linda xxoo
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Linda, this is a lovely free verse and your words have a dreamlike quality, suitable to your reminiscing theme. People will identify with this poem because we all reminiscing and I suspect they have pretty much the same thoughts. I certainly identify and enjoyed the read, especially -
and I wonder of my past
did I do all the right things?
did I walk the right path asked of me?
did I trip too many times to forgive?....... Lovely! But your finish on a good optimistic note in your final stanza - whatever..... it has made you who you are today. A good, thoughtful read. Warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hello Linda, this is a lovely free verse and your words have a dreamlike quality, suitable to your reminiscing theme. People will identify with this poem because we all reminiscing and I suspect they have pretty much the same thoughts. I certainly identify and enjoyed the read, especially -
and I wonder of my past
did I do all the right things?
did I walk the right path asked of me?
did I trip too many times to forgive?....... Lovely! But your finish on a good optimistic note in your final stanza - whatever..... it has made you who you are today. A good, thoughtful read. Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hi Dorothy, so good to see you my sweet friend...thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
