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Comment from w.j.debi
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Oh, it was delightful to see this new chapter pop up. The groundskeeper just keeps meeting more creatures. At least he has earned a few allies so far. Those imps appear to be trouble.
I love the description of the imp falling with the sound of an 'un-oiled hinge'. It is such an easy sound to imagine and so descriptive.
Looks like Constantine and Sir Archie have the situation well in hand. Or so we think...

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanx so much for the review, WJ -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
    I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
    Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
    Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
reply by w.j.debi on 20-Mar-2020
    Don't work too hard and stay safe. Good luck with the new challenge
Comment from aryr
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This indeed was an action packed chapter. It was easy to pick up and follow. Oh those nasty imps, Sir Archibald definitely took care of them. It would be interesting to know what was in the spray. It didn't seem to kill them, just immobilize them. Great job Yvette.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanx so much for the review, Alie -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
    I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
    Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
    Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from Ulla
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Awe, Yvette, another great little chapter to this delightful story. I thoroughly enjoy it and I think it's a great story aimed at pre-teen audience. I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanx much for stopping by for Nicholas' latest escapades, Ulla -- so glad to have you on-board!! ;) Have a great week out there! ;) Yvette
    I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
    Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
    Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!


Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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C7 -Those Pesky Imps
by Y. M. Roger

Hello, Yvette,

It amazes me the way you created a fantasy world in a garden. It's easy to imagine the little imps, the armadillo, and the gnome Constantine. Great characters. Great story. Good job with the chapter. Take care my friend.

Gypsy

Imp archie

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanx much for stopping by for Nicholas' latest escapades, Gypsy -- so glad to have you on-board!! ;) Have a great week out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Wonderful whimsy here. Vivid imagery and fresh humor. Boy, these are one mischievous bunch of buggers. Love the blueberry SPLAT! Sets the tone and takes off from there! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanx so much for the review, LIZ -- your support is wonderful and I am grateful!! ;)
    Please understand that this is a ridiculously abbreviated (and cut/paste) response for me, but I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
    Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
    Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from susand3022
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You're so funny... I have no earthly idea how you keep all of these straight. One day I'm going to see imps dancing around the garden with Bongo and I'll know you've gotten all mixed up! LOL Love you! :)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    LOL!! You never know... with all this 'onlining and streamlining and trotlining.... :) Okay, the last one there is a fishing thing, I just couldn't think of anything else! ;) :) Take care and thank you for everything! ;)
Comment from lyenochka
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Well, that was a thing. It's good Sir Archibald knew how to handle those "imps." But I'm curious as to what was in the spray and how did Archie know to use it. And what did it smell like other than it feeling sticky? Enjoyable cast of characters!

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanx so much for the review, Judy (and the catch) -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
    Please understand that this is a ridiculously abbreviated (and cut/paste) response for me, but I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
    Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
    Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
    [sorry - know you've seen this before, but I feel SOOO bad!!]
Comment from Ricky1024
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This was my second dose for chapter of your book Yvette.
I like the action in the blueberry splattering and then the mist almost like Raid!
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Oh, Ricky - you have made me NOT ready to just pull my hair out over here!! THANK YOU for this awesome review and those shining stars -- see? Help for the smile I have to wear as I make YouTube videos teaching math for my students!! ;) :) Please know that your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
    Please understand that this is a ridiculously abbreviated (and cut/paste) response for me, but I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
    Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
    Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hey Yvette. Been a while since I've seen the pink door. Since Archie found some anti-imp spray ad the hardware store. I'm going to have to check Lowe's to see If I can get some. That's quite an imagination you have there.

Z :))

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
    Yes.... one month (almost exactly this month... I'm trying to keep up, but we'll see with this 'kink' in the wire of doing everything online...!)... :) ;) But thanx for stopping by for Nicholas' latest escapades, Z -- It's really good to have you on-board!! ;) Have a great week out there! ;) Yvette
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Mar-2020
    You're welcome. Since I'm in the high risk category, I'll be spending a lot of time sleeping. (*_*) Z
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Lol! I'm gonna become an online teacher.... at least that's my positive thinking at 0330 hours since we got the email last night that everything's just canceled... ugh. ;)
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 16-Mar-2020
    Life is surely changing fast. :(
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Exceptional
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Looooove it! So, do you think I can borrow Archie to stop the imps eating me every summer? Wow, was I surprised to see the garden shed in my messages, I thought I must have been taken to Heaven! I love Archibald, what a hero! I will now put myself back into hibernation for a month, give me a shout when the next part comes! lol. Well done, my friend, this was just such a pleasure to read. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Oh, Sandra - you have made me NOT ready to just pull my hair out over here!! THANK YOU for this awesome review and those shining stars -- see? Help for the smile I have to wear as I make YouTube videos teaching math for my students!! ;) :) Please know that your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
    Please understand that this is a ridiculously abbreviated (and cut/paste) response for me, but I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
    Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
    Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
    [sorry - know you've seen this before, but I feel SOOO bad!!]