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The Gardens at Weatherbury

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Do these imps look like a devil or resemble a devil? Whatever happen to the gnomes that are so cute? I think your story has only one gnome. Wow, your story has so much imagination....these creatures are something to be seen.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
    One gnome, one pink armadillo and four imps.... so far! ;) :)
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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Ha! "Pesky" was the word, wasn't it! I wonder what was in the spray can, that Sir Archie sprayed so liberally, but which Constantine was so fond of and attached to? Maybe his favorite cologne? And why was Archie licking it? So many questions!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
    They are a complete disaster... LOL!! ;) :) Sprayable honey... yummy! ;) :)
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 18-Oct-2020
    Sprayable honey -- maybe you can patent that! You might make big sales! I don't know if there's a market for imps, though -- except imaginary ones ;-)
Comment from RShipp
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A pick ninja armadillo 'Terminator-in-a-can' ... Want an enjoyable plot happening.

I love that fact that the 'poison' seems to be edible.

This is a great read so far!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Yeah... I imagined it to be honey, ya know? weighting down their little wings... ;) :)
Comment from Lucy de Welles
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Continues right where we left off. Now, Archie is showing the imps who's boss! He even overrides Nicholas' protestations. Don't know if that's wise. Nicholas might need to show Archie who is really the boss!
Wonder what's in the aerosol can?
So, the imps were just let out of the drawer after a long while! Should have expected unruly behavior. Just testing their limits and getting exercise.
Maybe Archie had some old scores to settle :)

"Archie drenched the little guy, and it (he) dropped straight to the ground."

"struggling leaf" "unoiled hinge" --good use of metaphors.

Lovely read!
Lucy

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you again, Lucy -- you're awesome! ;) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
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Y,

Of course they will. I was concerned about the reaction Nicolas might have with the spray on his face, but it seemed it was harmless to humans, even when it got the attention of the imps so well. Nice!

Moving on!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Yeah... just honey (lol!) Thanx again for read-in, friend!! ;) Yvette
Comment from MamaBebop
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Yvette,
Finally had a couple moments this weekend to breathe a do something for myself. Things have been crazy here. Trying to find the new normal. Thank you for the brief fantastical world of Sir Archibald and Nicholas!!
Seems that Archie is Nicholas' protector??
Can't wait for Chapter 8.
Blessings,
Beth

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    You are so awesome, Beth!! THANK YOU!! I know your hands are full these days as are mine (for different reasons!), but this craziness has to end soon (or I might go crazy before you!). Everything I do has been (is being) converted to online... see? High School students can't afford to lose ground so we're plowing forward with YouTube and more... but what a hassle!! ;) Just give me a good ole fashion classroom anyday!! ;) You take care and I promise we'll be laughing at this some day!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Bill Schott
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This showdown with the imps brings out some more of Archie's pride in his duty and his aggressive nature when it comes to his Groundskeeper. Marvelous.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Wow!! What a wonderful surprise, Bill!! You have made me NOT ready to pull my hair out over here!! THANK YOU for this awesome review and those shining stars -- see? Help for the smile I have to wear as I make YouTube videos teaching math for my students!! ;) :) Please know that your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
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I feel the art of good story telling is the range of ages your words appeal to so I don't know if I'm your first septuagenarian devotee but I will be following this narrative eagerly, thank you.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Oh, I am so very glad you enjoyed this latest episode in Nicholas' story, and I would love to have your support: the greatest thing about fantasy is that age has no bearing on its enjoyment, yes?!! ;) You make me smile just knowing you are out there, my lady!! ;) :)
    Also, I do so apologize for the tardiness of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
    Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
reply by Bluesatinbutterfly on 20-Mar-2020
    That must mean a great deal of work for you. I imagine it's very hard to come from a place you can feel free to expand your mind into a rigid mind set that is so controlled. At the moment I see you surrounded by bars and I am frantically baking you a cake with a hacksaw in it. Oh I hope I haven't depressed you, I'm sure you take great delight in what you do :) Here in Scotland I am "Self Isolating" by order of good old Boris. Luckily for me I adore being at home. I spent over two years housebound waiting for a back opp. Four steel pins later I am up and about again, but I do miss the Morphine :) Take care of you.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Intriguing little chapter
Archie in full knight armour defending the garden from the little buggers. Life goes on, the garden must survive. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much, Iza, for both the review and simply because your support is wonderful!! :) Of course, you know why I'm so late, but I do apologize!! Gonna get on top of this soon and be back to a 'new normal' .... I am an optimist! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
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Such a gallent knight Sir Archibald is to indulge himself in a battle with those pesky imps. I assume he's the protector of Nicholas. You got a good story going Yvette. Hope you got time for the other two. :)

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanx so much for the review, Jose -- your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;) Hope things are good over there!! ;)
    I do so apologize for the tardiness (and cut-and-pastiness!) of this response, I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
    Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
    Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!