Arboreal Legacy
One generation begets the next...15 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I like how you have used the regeneration of nature as your topic for this poem - the cyclical / seasonal fall of leaves nurtures the next generation of seedlings.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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I like how you have used the regeneration of nature as your topic for this poem - the cyclical / seasonal fall of leaves nurtures the next generation of seedlings.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
What an excellent nature 5/7/5, this is a great poem and entry in this contest, the creative really speaks of natures ability to recreate itself, and perpetuate its priceless continuity, well done, good luck, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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What an excellent nature 5/7/5, this is a great poem and entry in this contest, the creative really speaks of natures ability to recreate itself, and perpetuate its priceless continuity, well done, good luck, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
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Bless you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The cycle of life and trees live for a very long time and dead wood has its uses, inside the forests there is much life, a poignant write here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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The cycle of life and trees live for a very long time and dead wood has its uses, inside the forests there is much life, a poignant write here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from George Anderson
Great 5-7-5 syllable poem. This describes the circle of vegetation beautifully. An old generation makes way for a new one! Excellent entry for the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Great 5-7-5 syllable poem. This describes the circle of vegetation beautifully. An old generation makes way for a new one! Excellent entry for the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this 5-7-5 that conveys a message about how one season prepares for the next.
"Nursery"--good metaphor :-)
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this 5-7-5 that conveys a message about how one season prepares for the next.
"Nursery"--good metaphor :-)
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!!
