Arboreal Legacy
One generation begets the next...15 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Your nature poem is interesting and I enjoyed reading it. Good alliteration of f words and sounds and your artwork choice goes well with your message.
best wishes!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Your nature poem is interesting and I enjoyed reading it. Good alliteration of f words and sounds and your artwork choice goes well with your message.
best wishes!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Arboreal Legacy
Hello, my friend,
Nice entry for the 5/7/5 nature contest. Beautiful presentation and good syllable count. You connected lines grammatically facilitating flow. Well done!
gypsy
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Arboreal Legacy
Hello, my friend,
Nice entry for the 5/7/5 nature contest. Beautiful presentation and good syllable count. You connected lines grammatically facilitating flow. Well done!
gypsy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Nature writing prompt.
This short verse tells of a forest being renewed.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Nature writing prompt.
This short verse tells of a forest being renewed.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for your review!
Comment from June Sargent
Nature has a way of renewing life each season. The cycle automatically continues regardless of what man does. And the first floor is a perfect example of new life sprouting beneath last year's leaves. Great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Nature has a way of renewing life each season. The cycle automatically continues regardless of what man does. And the first floor is a perfect example of new life sprouting beneath last year's leaves. Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from susand3022
Mayhap so, mayhap no... I guess it depends on where your forest is and how the winds blow. Will it be dry there do you know? Will the Santa Anna Winds there, blow? Will all that dry out and fall prey to a lightning bolt? Or will the trees and plants be allowed to grow? I guess there's only one sure way to know... ;)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Mayhap so, mayhap no... I guess it depends on where your forest is and how the winds blow. Will it be dry there do you know? Will the Santa Anna Winds there, blow? Will all that dry out and fall prey to a lightning bolt? Or will the trees and plants be allowed to grow? I guess there's only one sure way to know... ;)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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No dry here.... wet as we can be!! And it's raining again today... :) ;)
Comment from BeasPeas
Best of luck in the contest with this interesting write. Nature has a way of keeping itself going even in the harshest of circumstances. Even fire of a forest prompts new growth in a very short time. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Best of luck in the contest with this interesting write. Nature has a way of keeping itself going even in the harshest of circumstances. Even fire of a forest prompts new growth in a very short time. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the first line to the last children love to play that nursery any time.
Cookie
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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I love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the first line to the last children love to play that nursery any time.
Cookie
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 nature poem about the fallen leaves on the forest floor from all the years before begins this year's nutrition for new growth in Spring.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 nature poem about the fallen leaves on the forest floor from all the years before begins this year's nutrition for new growth in Spring.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from kahpot
This is very cleverly written, this years fallen will be next years growth, wonderful artwork for this excellent 5 poem, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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This is very cleverly written, this years fallen will be next years growth, wonderful artwork for this excellent 5 poem, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Nature is a wondrous things. It creates from it's death. It is reborn over and over again if we only let it alone to do what it was meant to do.
This is a great nature poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Nature is a wondrous things. It creates from it's death. It is reborn over and over again if we only let it alone to do what it was meant to do.
This is a great nature poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
