Exquisite Sunset
contest entry39 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 nature poem. A beautiful sunset is always a special occasion that we can enjoy and again realize how small and insignificant we are in God's creation.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 nature poem. A beautiful sunset is always a special occasion that we can enjoy and again realize how small and insignificant we are in God's creation.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Blessings...
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery.
-I like the use of "blazing."
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery.
-I like the use of "blazing."
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, comments and best wishes..
Blessings...
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing like a good sunset to bring some peace and tranquility to our World of chaos and mayhem, I enjoyed the serenity here, a beautiful nature write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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There is nothing like a good sunset to bring some peace and tranquility to our World of chaos and mayhem, I enjoyed the serenity here, a beautiful nature write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings
Comment from angel123
Your spiritual nature poem is exceptional and I enjoyed reading it. It flows with meaning and your artwork choice is breathe taking. This is a good contest entry. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Your spiritual nature poem is exceptional and I enjoyed reading it. It flows with meaning and your artwork choice is breathe taking. This is a good contest entry. Best wishes!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six star rating and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Blessings...
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely poem about the awe-inspiring sight of the sunset. Yes, we look at the beauties in the world and know HOW they got there.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely poem about the awe-inspiring sight of the sunset. Yes, we look at the beauties in the world and know HOW they got there.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments. Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...
Comment from Minglement
Well, an exquisite entry for the 5-7-5 Nature writing prompt to match your title. Marvelous artwork and presentation, as well. Beautiful word pictures in your few short syllables and giving the gory to God. Well done and Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Well, an exquisite entry for the 5-7-5 Nature writing prompt to match your title. Marvelous artwork and presentation, as well. Beautiful word pictures in your few short syllables and giving the gory to God. Well done and Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly, have a wonderful day...
Blessings...
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You're welcome. It was exquisite ;)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Nature writing prompt.
This short verse tells of the beautiful sunset.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Nature writing prompt.
This short verse tells of the beautiful sunset.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review.
Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...
Comment from TPAC
An interesting perspective to this event, feeling the active shifts of beams crossing the sky. Well stated in my viewpoint of this particular read. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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An interesting perspective to this event, feeling the active shifts of beams crossing the sky. Well stated in my viewpoint of this particular read. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...
Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...
Comment from Susan Larson
What an exquisite picture, showing God's glory shining through the rays! You say so much with these few words. I wish that all would see it the way you do and praise the Lord for the beauty of this world.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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What an exquisite picture, showing God's glory shining through the rays! You say so much with these few words. I wish that all would see it the way you do and praise the Lord for the beauty of this world.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for you review and very kind comments.
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Hugs...
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Pharp: beautiful sunset and sunrise when we see the gold light. God's glory shows through in the stars and sun. The big dipper points north and navigated people on the ocean. They trusted in the direction of the stars. We can trust and be amazed at Jesus. Great witness, Pharp.
flylikeaneagle - nancy *******************************
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Pharp: beautiful sunset and sunrise when we see the gold light. God's glory shows through in the stars and sun. The big dipper points north and navigated people on the ocean. They trusted in the direction of the stars. We can trust and be amazed at Jesus. Great witness, Pharp.
flylikeaneagle - nancy *******************************
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Nancy,
We must continue to be a witness for our Lord and Savior and declare His beauty and Glory in all that we do. His beauty surrounds us each and every day that we live, even in the midst of this virus, God's love shall come forth live pure gold. Satan has already been defeated when Christ died on the cross; therefore I plead the blood of Jesus and in His powerful and majestic name Satan has to flee. Thanks so much for your words of praise and stars that belong to our Lord.
Blessings my sister in Christ...?.
