Exquisite Sunset
contest entry39 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your poem. All the lines rhyme and are aligned. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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I have enjoyed reading your poem. All the lines rhyme and are aligned. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Nice job.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sally Law
So lovely mystery poet, and a sight for sore eyes. I have to view the sunset obscured due to my damaged retinas. It is still beautiful though and your lovely poem reminds me of the days when I could enjoy it more fully.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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So lovely mystery poet, and a sight for sore eyes. I have to view the sunset obscured due to my damaged retinas. It is still beautiful though and your lovely poem reminds me of the days when I could enjoy it more fully.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Blessings my friend, I am glad this poem reminded you of the days when you could enjoy the view of a beautiful sunset.
Thank you, and may God continue to keep you and your family in His loving care.
Blessings...
Comment from Therese Caron
Whenever I see a sunset even close to the beauty of this one, I know it's from God's hand. Some sunsets almost take your breath away and this is one of them. You chose beautiful words to describe it and used a beautiful image to enhance your words. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Whenever I see a sunset even close to the beauty of this one, I know it's from God's hand. Some sunsets almost take your breath away and this is one of them. You chose beautiful words to describe it and used a beautiful image to enhance your words. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review , very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a gorgeous sunset. Your poem expresses what God can do with his power. The picture paints an image of beauty. The sun descend as the sunset disappears behind the horizon.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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What a gorgeous sunset. Your poem expresses what God can do with his power. The picture paints an image of beauty. The sun descend as the sunset disappears behind the horizon.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
blazing with wavering rays (love the description here.)
Excellent 5-7-5 with well used alliteration. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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blazing with wavering rays (love the description here.)
Excellent 5-7-5 with well used alliteration. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings my friend.
Comment from lance michaels
What a beautiful five-seven-five poem, and an incredible picture that is accompanying it. Your words and picture describe a wonderful example of the beauty of our Lord. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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What a beautiful five-seven-five poem, and an incredible picture that is accompanying it. Your words and picture describe a wonderful example of the beauty of our Lord. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Lance,
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
What a magnificent masterpiece! Here is the result of a masterful brush that continuously creates scene after scene of the delicate beauty surrounding us in our sparkling world; connected with your exquisite words. Wow!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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What a magnificent masterpiece! Here is the result of a masterful brush that continuously creates scene after scene of the delicate beauty surrounding us in our sparkling world; connected with your exquisite words. Wow!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for such an outstanding review....
Blessings..
Comment from jaded831
What a beautiful sight, followed by words that paint the magic. God's touch is what brings all beauty into the world. In my mind all ugliness, such as war, is man made. Even a dying tree is beautiful for it is the cycle of life.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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What a beautiful sight, followed by words that paint the magic. God's touch is what brings all beauty into the world. In my mind all ugliness, such as war, is man made. Even a dying tree is beautiful for it is the cycle of life.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments...
Blessings
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, well no-one could argue with this poem, a perfect entry for the contest. I love sunsets and I think this is a love write. Superb choice of picture. You have written true to form in 5/7/5 form. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hello anon, well no-one could argue with this poem, a perfect entry for the contest. I love sunsets and I think this is a love write. Superb choice of picture. You have written true to form in 5/7/5 form. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments...
Blessings
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. You've included an excellent picture. It's a wonderful visual to go along with your story. Your narrative of "blazing with wavering rays" is excellent. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Hello mystery writer. You've included an excellent picture. It's a wonderful visual to go along with your story. Your narrative of "blazing with wavering rays" is excellent. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.
Blessings...
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You're welcome.
