My Greed
Deadly Sins Poetry Contest Entry7 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! This one should win from originality alone -- although I absolutely love your ballad rhythm! :) Great interpretation for the theme this evening -- best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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LOL! This one should win from originality alone -- although I absolutely love your ballad rhythm! :) Great interpretation for the theme this evening -- best of luck to you at the polls! ;) :)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hey, Yvette, hello. Thank you so much for the great review and stars. I got lucky with this one. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Deadly Sins writing prompt.
This well written verse tells of the sin of greed when it comes to Fanstory gold.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Deadly Sins writing prompt.
This well written verse tells of the sin of greed when it comes to Fanstory gold.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Sharon. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful night.
Ron
Comment from artisart4u
Very good and it is funny. Writers often write about things they haven't experience. Some famous people write about different things also, that is a writer. A writer can convince a person that they were there, seen or heard something. That is a good writer.
Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Very good and it is funny. Writers often write about things they haven't experience. Some famous people write about different things also, that is a writer. A writer can convince a person that they were there, seen or heard something. That is a good writer.
Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Art. I really appreciate the generous rating and kind words. Sorry about the delayed response. I have a home project going on that took up most of the last few days. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem on the deadly sin greed, My Greed, seems to have a lot to say about either the author or a more general and unfavorable impression of the site's elite contestants.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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This poem on the deadly sin greed, My Greed, seems to have a lot to say about either the author or a more general and unfavorable impression of the site's elite contestants.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hey, Bill, hi. It doesn't have anything to do with how he feels for the other contestants. It's all about the lust for that fake member gold. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, friend. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
I am laughing out loud. I have no idea what if any truth lies within your words, but I do know precisely how they resonated within my heart (which blackens with each word). Very well done. Very enjoyable and I wish you the very best in the contest! GO GOLD!!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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I am laughing out loud. I have no idea what if any truth lies within your words, but I do know precisely how they resonated within my heart (which blackens with each word). Very well done. Very enjoyable and I wish you the very best in the contest! GO GOLD!!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the huge sixer, Martie. Yeah, the member gold is pretty tempting on here. Lol. I love joining all these contests. So I have to win some here and there so I can afford it. Haha. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness, friend. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from LisaMay
Yeah, that's right - shift the blame! Your addictive, competitive greed is self-made, you clever bastard. We are guilty of ENVY at your poetic ability, even if it is shallow crap about unicorns.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Yeah, that's right - shift the blame! Your addictive, competitive greed is self-made, you clever bastard. We are guilty of ENVY at your poetic ability, even if it is shallow crap about unicorns.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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HAHAHA!!! Thank you for the great review and chuckle, Lisa. You know me too well. You made my night! Thanks again. ;-)
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...and you'll probably win a bucket of funny money AGAIN!!
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That's my goal. LOL
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Humorous while being honest. Good rhyme pattern. I found the end to be quite cute, and it made me chuckle, which is not an easy thing to do these days.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Humorous while being honest. Good rhyme pattern. I found the end to be quite cute, and it made me chuckle, which is not an easy thing to do these days.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Monica. I appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. That's all I was really going for. Have a wonderful day.
