Oh Life!
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Comment from Gloria ....
I love that first line...Fools rush...see art raw. Don't take the time to synthesize and integrate the meaning and the feeling of what is being experienced. Also exceptional last line that the wise find timeless art from raw. And now comes wisdom.
Gloria
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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I love that first line...Fools rush...see art raw. Don't take the time to synthesize and integrate the meaning and the feeling of what is being experienced. Also exceptional last line that the wise find timeless art from raw. And now comes wisdom.
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for good professional review
Comment from Bill Schott
Raw. Hide. Rawhide. I'm enjoying the hiding pleasure. I am searching my philosophical memory to link some of the expressions with a sponsored belief.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Raw. Hide. Rawhide. I'm enjoying the hiding pleasure. I am searching my philosophical memory to link some of the expressions with a sponsored belief.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for the review
Comment from Mzhurst
Rush in! ...... see art raw,
Wink colour, flavour, life, times
They come, view, leave with
Fools' heaven dark water words
Wise finds< find--- timeless art from raw.
Because this is so short one error hurts. The way this is used it needs to be find no plural.....
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Rush in! ...... see art raw,
Wink colour, flavour, life, times
They come, view, leave with
Fools' heaven dark water words
Wise finds< find--- timeless art from raw.
Because this is so short one error hurts. The way this is used it needs to be find no plural.....
Comment Written 27-Jun-2006
Comment from BellasTales
Wise finds timeless art from raw-Loved this line.
Once again Al- you've managed to make the most out of
so few words. Nicely written- didnt care to much for the font- BUT
enjoyed the Tanka.
Bella
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Wise finds timeless art from raw-Loved this line.
Once again Al- you've managed to make the most out of
so few words. Nicely written- didnt care to much for the font- BUT
enjoyed the Tanka.
Bella
Comment Written 27-Jun-2006
Comment from BeautysMessenger
I've seen raw art. I've seen art unplanned. The work makes an attempt to define our reactions to it and even judge those reactions.
That might be a bit presumptuous on the part of the narrator, but neverthelss, the reader comes away with food for thought.
That is something to be lauded.
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I've seen raw art. I've seen art unplanned. The work makes an attempt to define our reactions to it and even judge those reactions.
That might be a bit presumptuous on the part of the narrator, but neverthelss, the reader comes away with food for thought.
That is something to be lauded.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2006
Comment from Norbanus
Rush in, as fools are wont to do
and spot the first there is to see.
But, is what's on the surface really true?
Or is it like the forest and the tree?
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Rush in, as fools are wont to do
and spot the first there is to see.
But, is what's on the surface really true?
Or is it like the forest and the tree?
Comment Written 27-Jun-2006
Comment from proudgranny
I thoroughly enjoyed this one. It captured the spirit of the artist or the writer that finds wisdom in what he sees or reads.
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I thoroughly enjoyed this one. It captured the spirit of the artist or the writer that finds wisdom in what he sees or reads.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2006
Comment from mblundell68
Artist!;
Interesting form; however it shows a desire to have a calm flow about everyone and everything.
Like I said; very interesting, though there is not much more to add
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Artist!;
Interesting form; however it shows a desire to have a calm flow about everyone and everything.
Like I said; very interesting, though there is not much more to add
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from ScarletAffliction
Wink colour, flavour, life, times
They come, view, leave with
Fools'
great beginning. this always reminds me of those magnet poetry pieces. Do you do those too? How are you inspired to write the way you do and what makes you choose the tense and the plurals and all of that jazz? pardon me for picking your brain a bit. It almost seems a little like english isn't your first language, and if it isn't, I'm impressed. :)
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Wink colour, flavour, life, times
They come, view, leave with
Fools'
great beginning. this always reminds me of those magnet poetry pieces. Do you do those too? How are you inspired to write the way you do and what makes you choose the tense and the plurals and all of that jazz? pardon me for picking your brain a bit. It almost seems a little like english isn't your first language, and if it isn't, I'm impressed. :)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
Comment from Jewell McChesney
dang..
some of your stuff reads better backwards.
Rush in! ...... see art raw,
Wink colour, flavour, life, times
They come, view, leave with
Fools' heaven dark water words
Wise finds timeless art from raw.
Raw from art find wisdom
Words water dark heaven's fools
time for LIfe flavour Color winkl
raw art see in the rush
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dang..
some of your stuff reads better backwards.
Rush in! ...... see art raw,
Wink colour, flavour, life, times
They come, view, leave with
Fools' heaven dark water words
Wise finds timeless art from raw.
Raw from art find wisdom
Words water dark heaven's fools
time for LIfe flavour Color winkl
raw art see in the rush
Comment Written 26-Jun-2006
