Breathing Room
It's a matter of trust...18 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the message conveyed in this. Even though two people are in love, sometimes space is required as you've so eloquently stated. Sometimes opposites attract and they require different things from time to time. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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I love the message conveyed in this. Even though two people are in love, sometimes space is required as you've so eloquently stated. Sometimes opposites attract and they require different things from time to time. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your understanding review, Jeffrey - glad you could relate!
Comment from KyColonel Randal
Thank you for sharing this poem. It is indeed 10 words. I like how you have taken advantage of the presentation tools on this site, including: a relevant illustration, altered color scheme, and increased font size. Good luck with your contest entry!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing this poem. It is indeed 10 words. I like how you have taken advantage of the presentation tools on this site, including: a relevant illustration, altered color scheme, and increased font size. Good luck with your contest entry!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Breathing Room...is a beautiful poem entry for the ten words contest. Good line count. The words flow well. Good luck in the contest. Well done.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Breathing Room...is a beautiful poem entry for the ten words contest. Good line count. The words flow well. Good luck in the contest. Well done.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Alchera
This eleven syllable senryu is perfectly interwoven and written within its 2/4/6 structural format. Its honestly true love narrative story lined content is rare and unique but not impossible to find if jealousy and trustfulness is overcome. A great provocative thought!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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This eleven syllable senryu is perfectly interwoven and written within its 2/4/6 structural format. Its honestly true love narrative story lined content is rare and unique but not impossible to find if jealousy and trustfulness is overcome. A great provocative thought!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Yes, that green monster and innate insecurity are certainly hurdles that many find daunting... :) Thank you so very much for those bright stars and your truly 'understanding' review - both are much appreciated! ;) Enjoy the weekend! :)
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I am happy for you, Yvette and your your united family. On jealousy there is a great amount to discuss about. I am old enough for this staff and families nowadays drop easily because they don't understand what family sacrifies mean. Blessings. Tony
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is so true and love has to be unselfish so that there is consideration for one another, otherwise it does not last, I adored the sentiments behind these words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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This is so true and love has to be unselfish so that there is consideration for one another, otherwise it does not last, I adored the sentiments behind these words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your understanding review, Dolly.
Comment from kahpot
Very well said and expressed, love the artwork it is as though two separate entities are combining as one yet separate, an excellent short work, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Very well said and expressed, love the artwork it is as though two separate entities are combining as one yet separate, an excellent short work, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your review this evening!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very well written 10 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive and true words with very lovely imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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This is a very nice and very well written 10 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive and true words with very lovely imagery from the art work. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your review this evening!
