Her buddy
Cookie finds a dog.31 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
There is no more loyal a friend than a good dog. Many times I have stated four-legged barkers make better people than most two-legged species could ever hope to. This story once improves me right. Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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There is no more loyal a friend than a good dog. Many times I have stated four-legged barkers make better people than most two-legged species could ever hope to. This story once improves me right. Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Wils
This hit home for me as I have a "furry family" and recently lost one. This was a good story full of emotion. Wishing you good luck in the contest.
Geoff
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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This hit home for me as I have a "furry family" and recently lost one. This was a good story full of emotion. Wishing you good luck in the contest.
Geoff
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Sorry for your loss. I thank you for reading my story and your review.
Comment from Melissa Place
TPA...I too have cerebral palsy from birth. This is excellent. I hope to read more of your work in the future. Thanks for sharing this moving story. Best wishes in your writing. Melissa
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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TPA...I too have cerebral palsy from birth. This is excellent. I hope to read more of your work in the future. Thanks for sharing this moving story. Best wishes in your writing. Melissa
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello tpa. I was deeply touched reading your story. It is a wonderful narrative filled with emotion and raising the empathy of the reader. You've written a great entry for the contest. Good luck.
Robert
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Hello tpa. I was deeply touched reading your story. It is a wonderful narrative filled with emotion and raising the empathy of the reader. You've written a great entry for the contest. Good luck.
Robert
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your kind words.
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you're welcome
Comment from RShipp
Dogs (all animals, I think, but especially dogs) seem to latch on to a owner and suddenly the pet/owner relationship is somehow reversed.
Enjoyed the read.
Best of luck with the Flash Fiction contest.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Dogs (all animals, I think, but especially dogs) seem to latch on to a owner and suddenly the pet/owner relationship is somehow reversed.
Enjoyed the read.
Best of luck with the Flash Fiction contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt sad flash fiction about the dog who were loved and left alone when his caregiver dies. Until it was the dog's time to die he lived a lonely life and followed his mistress into death.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt sad flash fiction about the dog who were loved and left alone when his caregiver dies. Until it was the dog's time to die he lived a lonely life and followed his mistress into death.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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THANK YOU
Comment from lance michaels
A very good flash fiction story. I love dogs so the story struck home. A poignant story about the love between a person and a dog. I loved it. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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A very good flash fiction story. I love dogs so the story struck home. A poignant story about the love between a person and a dog. I loved it. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed the story.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Tpa,
Nice piece of General Fiction as Flash Fiction having lucid wording, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting the dog's natural attachment with cookie.
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Hello Tpa,
Nice piece of General Fiction as Flash Fiction having lucid wording, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting the dog's natural attachment with cookie.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Tpa, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Bichon
Quite a sad piece! I assume it is fiction? I hope so. Dogs often get attached to owners remarkably fast and become part of the family instantly. One suggestion, maybe change the picture to an image of the actual breed you are referencing in the poem.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Quite a sad piece! I assume it is fiction? I hope so. Dogs often get attached to owners remarkably fast and become part of the family instantly. One suggestion, maybe change the picture to an image of the actual breed you are referencing in the poem.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Sandtana Kay
My daughter in law works with an animal shelter. When itis full she takes
the overflow home with her. She has three large dogs that she won't part with. She traveled over two hundred miles to pick up a litter of eight puppies and the mother dog. She has cats and kittens also. She spends her weekends in front of a local national pet store showing animals ready for adoption. The local animal shelter depends on her a lot and she never
says no. Animals can be very loving.
Sandtana Kay
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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My daughter in law works with an animal shelter. When itis full she takes
the overflow home with her. She has three large dogs that she won't part with. She traveled over two hundred miles to pick up a litter of eight puppies and the mother dog. She has cats and kittens also. She spends her weekends in front of a local national pet store showing animals ready for adoption. The local animal shelter depends on her a lot and she never
says no. Animals can be very loving.
Sandtana Kay
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you
