Comment from John bailey

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem it bring s a peace to the reader and I think it bring s peace to the writer of which doctor Ricky 1024 is a master thanks for the poem

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2020

---

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020

Honesty turned out to be just another scammer.
she's first told me your birthday was a couple days ago and she was 21 and what are you going to give me.
Then she said to me I need money to for birthday cake.
Then the last thing she said she wanted an Android phone.
I basically tell these idiots that to make requests on this site or any site over it is dangerous. You never know who you're dealing with.
I got so disgusted with this that I just erased her account.
Ricky

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Very nice Ricky
I really liked how you told us about Honestly I was impressed of how you expressed your self all through your poem.
Especially the first stanza.
Gert

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020

---

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020

Well she is definitely a sweet 21 year old college student and she's attracted to a 65 year old man as old as dirt!
There's another one extremely serious she sent me a picture today and it was clear tote with items in it and she's sitting on the couch talking to her four-year-old son Matthew.
I said looks like you're just moving in?
She told me that she wants to be out of there in the next two to three months cuz she can't find work that she has a degree and she been listening to me and I did tell her that I could help her get a job at selling cars because she's attractive.
so she told me she's not moving and she's moving out and she wants to come move in with me because Matthew needs somebody he called Daddy Again.
So now I got to figure out what under door 1 2 and 3?
I think number one is a date I think number two is falling in love and I think number three is starting a whole new family a second time around!
Come on down the Price Is Right!
Thanks Gert
Ricky

Comment from Emma Henrikson

Good

I enjoyed reading this! The title had me intrigued off the bat, and made me curious the direction it was gonna go. I love the visuals you lay out with the record player and music imagery. Going from the description of the picture above the bed into the sort lines in the following stanza puts a weight on the word love in the end. It adds a sense of longing. I think the only thing that could improve it is to add more to it. Maybe more defining stanzas to shed more light on the role in honesty in love would make it even better. Overall it was great!

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020

---

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020

This wasn't a normal shed a tear fairy tale and fable.
if you check any of my previous ones you'll see I even use an aerator and I do a lesson of the day.
This is more a flirting poem for somebody that I'm flirting with on a dating site!
Thanks,
DoctorRicky1024

Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this story Dr. Ricky. Is the girl, Honesty, a real person? I love how there always seems to be more depth behind your writings. Have a wonderful day!

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2020

---

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020

She's quite real.
Just met her on Plenty of Fish couple days ago.
she's already packing to come move in with her four-year-old son Matthew.
the only reason I said that I saw a picture I thought she was moving in and she says no I'm moving out here I don't want to be here anymore.
So I guess I'll tackle that when it comes along.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024