Poverty
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Comment from Louise Michelle
You did a good job with this short, short. It really is heartbreaking how many homeless people there are and when one considers the children - it's so depressing. Great image to go with your words. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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You did a good job with this short, short. It really is heartbreaking how many homeless people there are and when one considers the children - it's so depressing. Great image to go with your words. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you. I'm not very good with short poems, so I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from pharp
Mystery Poet,
You have penned a very heartfelt poem for this writing prompt. It is very sad that so many families with children in America and around the world are hungry and homeless. We never know, this could very well happen to us.
Blessings...Portia
Thanks for sharing this information in your author's notes as well.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Mystery Poet,
You have penned a very heartfelt poem for this writing prompt. It is very sad that so many families with children in America and around the world are hungry and homeless. We never know, this could very well happen to us.
Blessings...Portia
Thanks for sharing this information in your author's notes as well.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and notes. This is an issue that is dear to me.
Comment from WriterHeather
You did a great job of getting an important message out there in poetry form. I really appreciate that this rhymes. Great work! Goos luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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You did a great job of getting an important message out there in poetry form. I really appreciate that this rhymes. Great work! Goos luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for these wonderful stars.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
To see whole families makes one thankful for the things they have... ;) :) Such a wonderful offering for this limited format contest - best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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To see whole families makes one thankful for the things they have... ;) :) Such a wonderful offering for this limited format contest - best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review.
Comment from Martie Zuckerman
The picture you have chosen to accompany certainly fits your words. Such a sad commentary. These few lines tell a big story. Good job and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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The picture you have chosen to accompany certainly fits your words. Such a sad commentary. These few lines tell a big story. Good job and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you...I like to bring awareness when I can. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Short and sweet with a great message. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Short and sweet with a great message. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you..I'm glad you liked it. :)
