Glimmers of the Past
Always there...16 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
as well as the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-I like how you divide the
poem in half with two
descriptive examples
and comparisons.
-Life's lagoon" is a very good,
vivid image.
-A good concluding line.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
as well as the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-I like how you divide the
poem in half with two
descriptive examples
and comparisons.
-Life's lagoon" is a very good,
vivid image.
-A good concluding line.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from May 1
Wow, that creates such a wonderful image in my mind. I love that. I love the comparison you chose to use and the way you chose to present this poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Wow, that creates such a wonderful image in my mind. I love that. I love the comparison you chose to use and the way you chose to present this poem. All in all, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from samandlancelot
I like the picture you've painted. It's like you can recreate the same smile you had when the memory was formed, and it's new again, and you are a child again, carefree. Nice!
Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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I like the picture you've painted. It's like you can recreate the same smile you had when the memory was formed, and it's new again, and you are a child again, carefree. Nice!
Patricia
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This poem pushes long gone childhood memories to the fore.
For me, memories are primordial, and account for a major part of our worth. They should be used to share and transmit, humbly and honestly.
Thus, as writers we pursue an unending goal of striving for improved communication with others, and better contact between ourselves and our readers. Always read your reviews most carefully, and don't fly off the handle - the reader is always right.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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This poem pushes long gone childhood memories to the fore.
For me, memories are primordial, and account for a major part of our worth. They should be used to share and transmit, humbly and honestly.
Thus, as writers we pursue an unending goal of striving for improved communication with others, and better contact between ourselves and our readers. Always read your reviews most carefully, and don't fly off the handle - the reader is always right.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review - much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed these few words that spoke of childhood memories and how they can re-kindle a smile within us, we will never forget the good times from yesteryear, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed these few words that spoke of childhood memories and how they can re-kindle a smile within us, we will never forget the good times from yesteryear, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!
Comment from kahpot
Yes, childhood memories can reflect the smiles of days now gone, a wonderful short poem and presentation, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Yes, childhood memories can reflect the smiles of days now gone, a wonderful short poem and presentation, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Many thank for your review and wishes!!
