Glimmers of the Past
Always there...16 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
I believe you have meet the required number of syllables.
My favorite line: "Childhood mem'ries are
Sparkling sun rays ..." Nice!
Enjoyed the read.
Best of luck with the 25 Syllable Poem writing contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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I believe you have meet the required number of syllables.
My favorite line: "Childhood mem'ries are
Sparkling sun rays ..." Nice!
Enjoyed the read.
Best of luck with the 25 Syllable Poem writing contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for your review - much appreciated!
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-syllable poem, Glimmers, has the proper syllable count and shines with alliteration as we squint to see our lives before. Nice.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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This twenty-five-syllable poem, Glimmers, has the proper syllable count and shines with alliteration as we squint to see our lives before. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review, Bill!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really good work and thought provoking. I love the line that says, life's lagoons. I love the message conveyed in this one enjoyed reading this creative and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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This is really good work and thought provoking. I love the line that says, life's lagoons. I love the message conveyed in this one enjoyed reading this creative and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review, Jeffrey - glad you enjoyed!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty-five syllable poem. The glimmers of the water on the like projects the memories of our past that flashes back to us and yielding yesterday's smiles.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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A very well-written twenty-five syllable poem. The glimmers of the water on the like projects the memories of our past that flashes back to us and yielding yesterday's smiles.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for your review!
Comment from Stephanie Paige
I enjoyed reading your entry for the 25 syllable poem contest. It is a great metaphor. Childhood memories always make me smile. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed reading your entry for the 25 syllable poem contest. It is a great metaphor. Childhood memories always make me smile. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for your review!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Nice image for those happy childhood memories! Except some memories are dark night and thunder instead. Tee hee, that was work for a stacked poem. Good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Nice image for those happy childhood memories! Except some memories are dark night and thunder instead. Tee hee, that was work for a stacked poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your review and good luck with your 'stack'!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is a lovely, lovely use of 25 syllables. I particularly like your second line. I have never seen life called a lagoon before. I like it, and I like your originality.
This one should do well in the contest. For sure.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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This is a lovely, lovely use of 25 syllables. I particularly like your second line. I have never seen life called a lagoon before. I like it, and I like your originality.
This one should do well in the contest. For sure.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Many special thanks for your awesome review!!
Comment from Cindy Decker
This poem brings me the sensation I feel each summer when I remember summers past. The sun, the lazy haze, the words you put into your poem. I love the extremely effective use of alliteration.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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This poem brings me the sensation I feel each summer when I remember summers past. The sun, the lazy haze, the words you put into your poem. I love the extremely effective use of alliteration.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you for such an awesome review, Cindy, and those stars are just lovely! I'm glad you enjoyed this little 'reflective' writing... sometimes those memories just 'pop' in at some of the most unexpected times, don't they? Have a great day!
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Glimmers of the Past
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 25 syllables poem contest. Your syllables count is right. The presentation is beautiful. The lines flow well.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Glimmers of the Past
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 25 syllables poem contest. Your syllables count is right. The presentation is beautiful. The lines flow well.
Gypsy
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
