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Being at Peace

contest entry

2 total reviews 
Comment from w.j.debi
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This is a beautiful expression of faith. It is contemplative as well as expressing confidence and gratitude. The artwork complements the theme perfectly.
Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes...
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I like how you divide the
poem in two parts.
-First, you show how
you are "assured in who you are."
-The concluding lines show
how your beliefs bring a
sense of comfort.
-A good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes...
reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Mar-2020
    You are very welcome.