My Love
A 25 syllable poem21 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
What a beautiful loop poem, as well as the 25 syllable poem inspired by the prompt, AND an acrostic poem to boot. You deserve some kind of prize just for your triple crown achievement!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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What a beautiful loop poem, as well as the 25 syllable poem inspired by the prompt, AND an acrostic poem to boot. You deserve some kind of prize just for your triple crown achievement!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, it was a fun write
Comment from karenina
Whoa. So you've managed a 25 syllable chain poem that feels smooth flowing and genuine and not at all contrived? That's pretty amazing, really! Best of luck to you in the contest!--Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Whoa. So you've managed a 25 syllable chain poem that feels smooth flowing and genuine and not at all contrived? That's pretty amazing, really! Best of luck to you in the contest!--Karenina
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A 25 syllable poem
My Love
Hello my friend
Nice loop poem for the 25 syllable count contest. Good syllable count. Pretty presentation. Well done.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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A 25 syllable poem
My Love
Hello my friend
Nice loop poem for the 25 syllable count contest. Good syllable count. Pretty presentation. Well done.
Gypsy
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty five syllable poem about love that we have and freely give to a certain person in our life whose love will be ours for eternity.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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A very well-written twenty five syllable poem about love that we have and freely give to a certain person in our life whose love will be ours for eternity.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"My Love", is a well-written and intriguing piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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"My Love", is a well-written and intriguing piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
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DEAR ANON,
YOU'RE MORE THAN WELCOME.
GOOD LUCK WITH THE CONTEST.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine romantic loop and also acrostic poem, filled with long lasting love, a clever and warm hearted write, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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This is a fine romantic loop and also acrostic poem, filled with long lasting love, a clever and warm hearted write, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from kiwisteveh
Well done for managing to amalgamate three restrictions - 25 syllables, acrostic and loop - a work of patience and perseverance, I imagine.
Of course there is also the small matter of having it make sense and carry a worthwhile message. You score well on those counts too.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Well done for managing to amalgamate three restrictions - 25 syllables, acrostic and loop - a work of patience and perseverance, I imagine.
Of course there is also the small matter of having it make sense and carry a worthwhile message. You score well on those counts too.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, an inspiring review and comments, it was a fun challenge
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
I like how you created an acrostic loop with only 25 syllables. This is an excellent poem for the contest. I also liked the photo. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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I like how you created an acrostic loop with only 25 syllables. This is an excellent poem for the contest. I also liked the photo. Best of luck.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, it was a fun write
Comment from QC Poet
I like the way your poem stayed focused on the Love between two through out the writing. Thank you for Sharing your Poem and awesome photo included. Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I like the way your poem stayed focused on the Love between two through out the writing. Thank you for Sharing your Poem and awesome photo included. Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you vey much
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a well written poem. I know there is a name for this form that uses the last word of the proceeding line as the first word of the next line, but I can't think of it at the moment. You used the form effectively and kept to the syllable count.
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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This is a well written poem. I know there is a name for this form that uses the last word of the proceeding line as the first word of the next line, but I can't think of it at the moment. You used the form effectively and kept to the syllable count.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, two forms here, Acrostic-Loop
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Loop was the one I was missing. Great job combining the two.
