My Love
A 25 syllable poem21 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
I believe you have meet the required number of syllables.
Your opening line is the best!
Enjoyed the read.
Best of luck with the 25 Syllable Poem writing contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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I believe you have meet the required number of syllables.
Your opening line is the best!
Enjoyed the read.
Best of luck with the 25 Syllable Poem writing contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-syllable acrostic loop poem, MY LOVE, follows the vertical theme, has the proper syllable count, and vows that eternity is the realm in which true love reigns.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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This twenty-five-syllable acrostic loop poem, MY LOVE, follows the vertical theme, has the proper syllable count, and vows that eternity is the realm in which true love reigns.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. The message is clear that you've conveyed in this. You've given up your life as an individual. You've poured your life into someone else, merging with them, losing your life in them, becoming one with them. You're just one person now. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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I like this. The message is clear that you've conveyed in this. You've given up your life as an individual. You've poured your life into someone else, merging with them, losing your life in them, becoming one with them. You're just one person now. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Janice Canerdy
A romantic, moving twenty-five syllable acrostic loop poem--This is quite an accomplishment! This piece conveys a powerful message about enduring love.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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A romantic, moving twenty-five syllable acrostic loop poem--This is quite an accomplishment! This piece conveys a powerful message about enduring love.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Shirley McLain
A great poem that paints a picture of love forever. I did not see one thing to make corrections on. Good luck in the contest. You to a wonderful job. Shirley
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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A great poem that paints a picture of love forever. I did not see one thing to make corrections on. Good luck in the contest. You to a wonderful job. Shirley
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sally Law
I enjoyed your 20 syllable loop style poem, mystery poet. True love desires oneness for life in my humble opinion. A fine entry for the upcoming contest.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your 20 syllable loop style poem, mystery poet. True love desires oneness for life in my humble opinion. A fine entry for the upcoming contest.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally :)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You did a great job with a difficult style. Good work. This is an excellent contest entry and should do very well. Good luck in the voting booth. I hope you win.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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You did a great job with a difficult style. Good work. This is an excellent contest entry and should do very well. Good luck in the voting booth. I hope you win.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Patty Palmer
A short loop poem. So few words with so much meaning! Your words are very well used. When you only have a few words to work with, you have to make every one count! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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A short loop poem. So few words with so much meaning! Your words are very well used. When you only have a few words to work with, you have to make every one count! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
After the love poem "Everything," now I read the one "forever". There are a lot of love poems in this contest. The choice is going to be difficult. Yours is a very delicate one, and especially with a high fusional content. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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After the love poem "Everything," now I read the one "forever". There are a lot of love poems in this contest. The choice is going to be difficult. Yours is a very delicate one, and especially with a high fusional content. Nicely written.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, yes there are some very excellent entries
Comment from Debbie Pope
I applaud the creativity that you show in this piece. You have such an artistic approach. It was also clever for you to incorporate an acrostic into your poem. That is much more than the prompt required. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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I applaud the creativity that you show in this piece. You have such an artistic approach. It was also clever for you to incorporate an acrostic into your poem. That is much more than the prompt required. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, yes I thought I would try to dress it up a bit
