Oh Life!
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Banter!"Experiences of living
155 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
Perhaps something in here addresses the tense relationship that may exist between a father and son. The arguments that test the will of each.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Perhaps something in here addresses the tense relationship that may exist between a father and son. The arguments that test the will of each.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for the review
Comment from 9999pool
Good write about life and how our parents influenced us. parents and children do have misunderstandings but as the years passed, many have learnt to reconciled their differences.
Great write - short and swift with a message.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Good write about life and how our parents influenced us. parents and children do have misunderstandings but as the years passed, many have learnt to reconciled their differences.
Great write - short and swift with a message.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for nice professional review
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Welcome, cheers, Ritchie.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem makes me think of times I obsessed over the safety of my child and of times I had to enforce rules that made her dislike me. She's grown; she likes me now!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Your ultra-concise poem makes me think of times I obsessed over the safety of my child and of times I had to enforce rules that made her dislike me. She's grown; she likes me now!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for good review
Comment from Empathy
I have a feeling this is better than I am currently assessing...the problem is I don't yet understand it. I read it at least six times...in different ways...I must be looking but not seeing. It may be out of context. I like the idea of challenging the reader...but I will need this one explained. Cheers, E.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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I have a feeling this is better than I am currently assessing...the problem is I don't yet understand it. I read it at least six times...in different ways...I must be looking but not seeing. It may be out of context. I like the idea of challenging the reader...but I will need this one explained. Cheers, E.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks
Comment from neharika.m
hi, thats an excellent verse. I am not technically sound or even aware, and still learning, but the poem made a powerful statement which hits hard and how. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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hi, thats an excellent verse. I am not technically sound or even aware, and still learning, but the poem made a powerful statement which hits hard and how. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for good review
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
I'm not really a poet, I'm new on the site and I'm 86 years old to boot/ But this reads like and sounds like a poem to me. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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I'm not really a poet, I'm new on the site and I'm 86 years old to boot/ But this reads like and sounds like a poem to me. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for good review
Comment from cutie
your poem's meanings the most unique and most impossible to understand clearly ones i've ever read here.
you're and your poems very interesting...really!
because when first nor eleventh and thirteenth times hopelessly passing through struggling in puzzled lines !
but it's very good
and my big thanks welcoming you!!! ;O)
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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your poem's meanings the most unique and most impossible to understand clearly ones i've ever read here.
you're and your poems very interesting...really!
because when first nor eleventh and thirteenth times hopelessly passing through struggling in puzzled lines !
but it's very good
and my big thanks welcoming you!!! ;O)
Comment Written 18-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW AND THE ENDEAVOR.
Comment from mhk
Interesting portrait of a parent. It's a tough job, and you've captured a good part of this. Once again, your words make me think, and in a small way, appreciate what I gave my own children. Thanks!
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Interesting portrait of a parent. It's a tough job, and you've captured a good part of this. Once again, your words make me think, and in a small way, appreciate what I gave my own children. Thanks!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
Comment from AmoksSoulmate
Grfeat little poem. First of all it's structurally correct. Now on to the meaning. I read this as a parent thinking or speaking of their concern for how their children will percieve their interactions, particularly words, through the child rearing process. Very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.
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Grfeat little poem. First of all it's structurally correct. Now on to the meaning. I read this as a parent thinking or speaking of their concern for how their children will percieve their interactions, particularly words, through the child rearing process. Very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2006
Comment from tuskantail
So be it. If Shakespeare, Milton etc etc could use it who would I be to question? Another good little write about children's attitudes. You write these well.
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So be it. If Shakespeare, Milton etc etc could use it who would I be to question? Another good little write about children's attitudes. You write these well.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2006
