Oh Life!
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Banter!"Experiences of living
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Comment from Badger_29
I'm sorry that I didn't get to read the complete office notes I'm sure they would have been a treat! I couldn't quite get the gist of this I read it twice and was distracted by my ex dealer who gave me advice great advice to slow down slow down and smell the roses thank you so much for being my friend here I can't tell you how much I appreciate your words of wisdom.
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I'm sorry that I didn't get to read the complete office notes I'm sure they would have been a treat! I couldn't quite get the gist of this I read it twice and was distracted by my ex dealer who gave me advice great advice to slow down slow down and smell the roses thank you so much for being my friend here I can't tell you how much I appreciate your words of wisdom.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
Comment from TammyRenee
Parenthood such a joyful beginning, but all the scary thoughts about how we raise our children.
The fear of not getting it right.
Good job.
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Parenthood such a joyful beginning, but all the scary thoughts about how we raise our children.
The fear of not getting it right.
Good job.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from Lana Marie
As you noted that your writings come from real life experiences. It is so true that we give birth and our offspring carry are genes in their blood. It's sad when you do everything you can to raise them and nurture them and at some point they act like they don't want anything to do with you. I'm thankful I have not experienced this myself but you know of many families that have had they are children in a sense walk away. But I always believe it's temporary. They have to find their own way.
There's a lot that you can reflect on in your poem. Thank you for sharing
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As you noted that your writings come from real life experiences. It is so true that we give birth and our offspring carry are genes in their blood. It's sad when you do everything you can to raise them and nurture them and at some point they act like they don't want anything to do with you. I'm thankful I have not experienced this myself but you know of many families that have had they are children in a sense walk away. But I always believe it's temporary. They have to find their own way.
There's a lot that you can reflect on in your poem. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from Boogienights
Are you trying to say that parents, in raising thier children, may also alienate them because of they lessons they teach? We do run a risk of that, but when it comes down to it, it's worth the risk. Thanks for sharing.:)
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Are you trying to say that parents, in raising thier children, may also alienate them because of they lessons they teach? We do run a risk of that, but when it comes down to it, it's worth the risk. Thanks for sharing.:)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
The life blood of all men is the future their existence. I don't know what every man believes or exists, I don't know what necessarily makes them tick, nor why the exist, not what hope they hold. I would hope they would live for some sort of hope. Well done, blessings Roy
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The life blood of all men is the future their existence. I don't know what every man believes or exists, I don't know what necessarily makes them tick, nor why the exist, not what hope they hold. I would hope they would live for some sort of hope. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Good upbringing is what it is about good blood. We should encourage the children how to think and not our own ideas into their innocent mind and tell them what to think.This is what I interpret from the cryptic comments.
Once you have children, your life changes forever.Thanks for sharing!
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Good upbringing is what it is about good blood. We should encourage the children how to think and not our own ideas into their innocent mind and tell them what to think.This is what I interpret from the cryptic comments.
Once you have children, your life changes forever.Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2021
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello. I believe I understand your message. Though we embody the bloodline, we risk standing to be disowned by our own. In many ways, this would be correct. Sometimes our own friends know us more so than our own family which when that occurs perhaps, either our bloodline our we ourselves took the course of dis-ownership.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Hello. I believe I understand your message. Though we embody the bloodline, we risk standing to be disowned by our own. In many ways, this would be correct. Sometimes our own friends know us more so than our own family which when that occurs perhaps, either our bloodline our we ourselves took the course of dis-ownership.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from GarthL
I think your last statement should read 'I wonder' as it is obvious you do a lot of internal intellectualising. Yes the relationship between parents and children is often fraught with disappointment and disagreement but the reality is bloodlines and DNA go very deep and intrinsically make us what we are and then we evolve according to our experiences and environmental influences. Deep 5-7-5-7-7. StriveOn, Garth
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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I think your last statement should read 'I wonder' as it is obvious you do a lot of internal intellectualising. Yes the relationship between parents and children is often fraught with disappointment and disagreement but the reality is bloodlines and DNA go very deep and intrinsically make us what we are and then we evolve according to our experiences and environmental influences. Deep 5-7-5-7-7. StriveOn, Garth
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for lovely creative review
Comment from Lise Deangelo
Yes, families can be complicated. Relationships change sometimes. Children grow to independence and parents hearts are always at the mercy of their kids. That's love. Thanks for sharing :) Lise
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Yes, families can be complicated. Relationships change sometimes. Children grow to independence and parents hearts are always at the mercy of their kids. That's love. Thanks for sharing :) Lise
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for nice review
Comment from Paradox Tremors
The trials and sacrifices by parents for their children is not always understood by them. Incredibly good but it took me two or three reads to think I understood the meaning. Keep on writing my friend.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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The trials and sacrifices by parents for their children is not always understood by them. Incredibly good but it took me two or three reads to think I understood the meaning. Keep on writing my friend.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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thanks for the read and the review
