The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Stormy Nights in the City"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Natalie Goodwin
The images in the poem provide a mix of darkness and chaos that gives it a noir feel. I also like the rhyme pattern. The photo is clear and beautiful as well. No distortion. Great work.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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The images in the poem provide a mix of darkness and chaos that gives it a noir feel. I also like the rhyme pattern. The photo is clear and beautiful as well. No distortion. Great work.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the Support and Encouraging Rating. God's Blessings to you for your Time taken to review this poem offering. .
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
The first two verses are perfect, then the change in the rhyme pattern seems to let you down a bit, and at one point the meter seems to go a bit loose.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed it for what was good in it, that easily outweighed the poor.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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The first two verses are perfect, then the change in the rhyme pattern seems to let you down a bit, and at one point the meter seems to go a bit loose.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed it for what was good in it, that easily outweighed the poor.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you for the Gracious Review and Time Taken to Read this poem offering. May God's Blessings be with you.