Make-over in Early March
a 5-7-5 contest entry10 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of an ice storm changing a willow into a witch.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of an ice storm changing a willow into a witch.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my short poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Aphthong
The picture and your poem complimenting each other.. You could create a wonderful imagery with those words.. Great entry in the contest poet.. Good luck..
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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The picture and your poem complimenting each other.. You could create a wonderful imagery with those words.. Great entry in the contest poet.. Good luck..
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much foo your kind praise of MAKE-OVER IN EARLY MARCH.
Comment from RShipp
All of the requirements have been met of a 5-7-5 poem.
The illustration your picked to accompany your poem is perfect!
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 writing contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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All of the requirements have been met of a 5-7-5 poem.
The illustration your picked to accompany your poem is perfect!
Best of luck in the 5-7-5 writing contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your encouraging review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A FS member 5-7-5 Poetry contest.
Forever Young
Hello my friend
Well done with your 5-7-5 Poetry contest entry. The presentation is nice. The syllable count is right. The lines flow effortlessly.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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A FS member 5-7-5 Poetry contest.
Forever Young
Hello my friend
Well done with your 5-7-5 Poetry contest entry. The presentation is nice. The syllable count is right. The lines flow effortlessly.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Many thanks, Gypsy, for your kind praise.
Comment from zanya
A great entry for the 5-7-5 contest with a wicked sense of fun and a great pic to illustrate - some very effective use of language 'wicked ice storm' & 'ancient willow'
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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A great entry for the 5-7-5 contest with a wicked sense of fun and a great pic to illustrate - some very effective use of language 'wicked ice storm' & 'ancient willow'
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I am so pleased this shortie was fun to read, zanya. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from LisaMay
I love how weather and a poet's imagination can change an ancient willow into a scary white-haired witch. Combined with the moody photo, this is an appealing presentation.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I love how weather and a poet's imagination can change an ancient willow into a scary white-haired witch. Combined with the moody photo, this is an appealing presentation.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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You have summarized the message of my short poem beautifully, Lisa. Thank you for your kind praise.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
That's an interesting interpretation of an ice-covered willow tree! Your poem meets the criteria for a 5-7-5. Even the ice storm itself was wicked! But the poem isn't -- it's well written. However I think I see two witches in that tree: one tall and balding, the other stooped over, with a wild mop of hair!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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That's an interesting interpretation of an ice-covered willow tree! Your poem meets the criteria for a 5-7-5. Even the ice storm itself was wicked! But the poem isn't -- it's well written. However I think I see two witches in that tree: one tall and balding, the other stooped over, with a wild mop of hair!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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You have keen eyesight, Mary Kay. Thank you for your kind praise of my 5-7-5.
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You're very welcome. Thanks for the compliment :-) Best wishes for the contest!
Comment from Cindy Decker
I love the alliteration of the w's in this poem. Your poem is very descriptive and has a Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Very good work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I love the alliteration of the w's in this poem. Your poem is very descriptive and has a Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Very good work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed the alliteration in my poem. Many thanks for your kind praise and best wishes.
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is awesome. You hit the nail on the head when an ice storm hits in March. We just had a dump of snow a few days ago, and it was not nice to see at the moment. But I have to admit it was pretty outdoors. Just as this poem refers to.
Drew
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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This is awesome. You hit the nail on the head when an ice storm hits in March. We just had a dump of snow a few days ago, and it was not nice to see at the moment. But I have to admit it was pretty outdoors. Just as this poem refers to.
Drew
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Drew, I am so pleased I got the details of a nice storm right. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Melissa Place
I like your poem. Sounds like early march in Ohio. Spring is just around the corner, though. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. God bless. Best wishes in your writing endeavors.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I like your poem. Sounds like early march in Ohio. Spring is just around the corner, though. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. God bless. Best wishes in your writing endeavors.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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I do hope you are right and Spring is just around the corner. Thank you for sharing my poem and your best wishes.