Life Is Full Of Irritations
5-7-5 It's a dog's life...10 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of misfortune and fleeing to change.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
This short piece tells of misfortune and fleeing to change.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
5-7-5 It's a dog's life...
Life Is Full Of Irritations
Hello my friend
Good syllable count. An excellent entry for the 5/7/5 contest. The topic is funny. Well done.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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5-7-5 It's a dog's life...
Life Is Full Of Irritations
Hello my friend
Good syllable count. An excellent entry for the 5/7/5 contest. The topic is funny. Well done.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Mark D. R.
A very funny and picture you composed for this contest.. Hopefully most FS reviewers will catch you dog and flee/flea connection with your itch.
Good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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A very funny and picture you composed for this contest.. Hopefully most FS reviewers will catch you dog and flee/flea connection with your itch.
Good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I hope they get the flee/flea too (not literally)
Comment from Drew Delaney
This made me chuckle! Why can't I think of things like that? You make it look so easy! You must be a fun person to be around. Just thought this so perfect.
Drew xx
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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This made me chuckle! Why can't I think of things like that? You make it look so easy! You must be a fun person to be around. Just thought this so perfect.
Drew xx
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for reviewing - laughter is the best medicine.
Comment from RShipp
What a great illustration for your play on the word "flee'. PERFECT!
I enjoyed the read. I made me itch?
Best of luck with the '5-7-5 writing prompt' contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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What a great illustration for your play on the word "flee'. PERFECT!
I enjoyed the read. I made me itch?
Best of luck with the '5-7-5 writing prompt' contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Sorry to make you start scratching! There wasn't a flea alert. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from victor 66
A lot of things occur in life that are negative and caused by a lack of thoughtfulness, or just bad luck. All are irritating and sometimes very confusing. I wish you luck in this contest.
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A lot of things occur in life that are negative and caused by a lack of thoughtfulness, or just bad luck. All are irritating and sometimes very confusing. I wish you luck in this contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a delightful yet oh-so-very-relatable offering for today's contest - great job!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;) :)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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This is a delightful yet oh-so-very-relatable offering for today's contest - great job!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;) :)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thanks Yvette.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well illustrated 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very cute and good descriptive words with very cute imagery. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
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This is a very cute and very well illustrated 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very cute and good descriptive words with very cute imagery. Best wishes in the contest. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
Comment from Susan X Smith
How cute is this one, with a picture to match. I appreciated all the puns. Your words flow nicely and the meter is in keeping with contest guidelines. Thanks for sharing.
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How cute is this one, with a picture to match. I appreciated all the puns. Your words flow nicely and the meter is in keeping with contest guidelines. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem. I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem. I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020