A Mountain's Magic
Thoughts while viewing my daughter's picture.7 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written 3 Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very beautiful imagery from the picture taken, and very good descriptive words with great notes. Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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This is a very beautiful and well written 3 Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very beautiful imagery from the picture taken, and very good descriptive words with great notes. Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much Teri for reading my poem and giving me those wonderful stars.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry. Your three lines, as required, say much about the draw those mountains have on most. Your well-chosen words describe the grandeur of mountains well. Thanks to the notes, too. I know exactly where this place is and about White Sands. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry. Your three lines, as required, say much about the draw those mountains have on most. Your well-chosen words describe the grandeur of mountains well. Thanks to the notes, too. I know exactly where this place is and about White Sands. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thanks Jan. I probably should have waited until after the contest to write the notes.
Comment from dmt1967
The picture is breath taking as is the poem. Both fit each other very well and I like the way it was written a lot. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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The picture is breath taking as is the poem. Both fit each other very well and I like the way it was written a lot. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem. your comments are inspiring, and your stars are wonderful.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Thats quite a breathtaking picture! Thank you for sharing this one...your daughter beautifully caught the essence of this mountain and you managed to convert her piece of art into a piece of poetry! A father-daughter tag team at work here! :-)
Best wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thats quite a breathtaking picture! Thank you for sharing this one...your daughter beautifully caught the essence of this mountain and you managed to convert her piece of art into a piece of poetry! A father-daughter tag team at work here! :-)
Best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing my poem. Yes we have collaborated on several similar items. Your rating is wonderful.
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Oh thats good! Keep up the good work :-)
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful offering of nature's beauty for the contest!! ;) I would suggest, perhaps a little bit of re-word of your first line so that you don't have a syllable that doesn't add to the impact of your poem:
A mountain's magic ----> mountain's magic peak [or top]
Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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A wonderful offering of nature's beauty for the contest!! ;) I would suggest, perhaps a little bit of re-word of your first line so that you don't have a syllable that doesn't add to the impact of your poem:
A mountain's magic ----> mountain's magic peak [or top]
Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for reading my poem. Your comment has a point that is well taken. Your stars are wonderful.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fabulous photo and your words did it justice, I have been up a few mountains in the alps and taken similar pictures and these are spectacular scenes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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This is a fabulous photo and your words did it justice, I have been up a few mountains in the alps and taken similar pictures and these are spectacular scenes, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and your generous stars.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poem contest.
This short verse is a good match for the amazing picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poem contest.
This short verse is a good match for the amazing picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and your wonderful stars.
