Seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Spring Verse"Colors of each of the 4
8 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I am so glad you started and ended with the same word. Many do not and I feel with the rules, it should be this way. Nicely done in the loop piece and did you want this in the contest?
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I am so glad you started and ended with the same word. Many do not and I feel with the rules, it should be this way. Nicely done in the loop piece and did you want this in the contest?
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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No, the contest requires additional rhyme and I was too lazy to change mine. Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful loop exploring and painting all of the wonders that Spring has to offer as the chill wears off -- thanx for sharing that mental picture this morning, Trisha! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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A wonderful loop exploring and painting all of the wonders that Spring has to offer as the chill wears off -- thanx for sharing that mental picture this morning, Trisha! :) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thanks Yvette for your kind review
Comment from Minglement
I enjoyed this lovely, visually appealing on poem on spring. You word images are beautiful and lend themselves well to this poem form. Thanks for sharinfpg.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed this lovely, visually appealing on poem on spring. You word images are beautiful and lend themselves well to this poem form. Thanks for sharinfpg.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thanks Minglement for your kind review
Hugs Tridha
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Good start with naked trees newly dressed and clever closing punch--season after dark and naked. Very fresh imagery there. Keep up the good work. Hope you accomplish the rest of your list! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Good start with naked trees newly dressed and clever closing punch--season after dark and naked. Very fresh imagery there. Keep up the good work. Hope you accomplish the rest of your list! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Loop style
Spring Verse
by Bucketlist
Hello, my friend,
I enjoyed reading your look style poem about spring. So many poets on the site are doing so and with good reason. Well done my friend.
gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Loop style
Spring Verse
by Bucketlist
Hello, my friend,
I enjoyed reading your look style poem about spring. So many poets on the site are doing so and with good reason. Well done my friend.
gypsy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine loop about the birth of spring here and all the fun and new life it brings and the joys that fresh new flowering buds add to our days, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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A fine loop about the birth of spring here and all the fun and new life it brings and the joys that fresh new flowering buds add to our days, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem about the new season Spring where new things are born from the ground with colorful blooms after the naked coldness of the winter months.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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A very well-written loop poem about the new season Spring where new things are born from the ground with colorful blooms after the naked coldness of the winter months.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from kahpot
There is an excellent story here in this loop poem which you have completed wonderfully (naked) as the story goes through many different cycles of life, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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There is an excellent story here in this loop poem which you have completed wonderfully (naked) as the story goes through many different cycles of life, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thanks kahpot, you made my night with your complimentary review!
Hugs, Trisha