Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 2-4-2 poem, Safe Harbor, has the proper syllable set up and finds the safe port of entry among the embrace of forest fortress.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020

Thanks for reading and responding to my work.

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

The reader will be drawn in to reflect on how a long shaded driveway could be shelter. I think of it as shelter from the hot sun. But that is an obvious shelter. I would like to go deeper. It would or has been shelter for me from the maddening crowd, the past & future rattling in my mind. I am brought into the present moment. It also shelters me from the noises, not of nature. I hope this poem elicits such thoughts from the readers. Well thought out. I am voting for this one.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020

Thank you for the comments. They were certainly appreciated.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020

Thanks for reading and responding. I appreciate it.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of the safety found at the end of a driveway.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020

Thank you for the comments and the good wishes.