Sex
How often is enough?3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2 poem, Sex, has the proper syllable set up and reminds those who may not ride the dragon as often as before, the ride is still a thrill.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This 2-4-2 poem, Sex, has the proper syllable set up and reminds those who may not ride the dragon as often as before, the ride is still a thrill.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thanks, Bill, for your review!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of sometimes being better than never. True of many things.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt.
This short verse tells of sometimes being better than never. True of many things.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thanks, Sharon!
Comment from Mark D. R.
A cute idea portrayed in your contest entry. IMHO, 'never' does not need to be capitalized, especially since you included a period after it.
I doubt many FS reviewers would deem this text to be over the top (-;
Best wishes for your Sex prompt entry.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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A cute idea portrayed in your contest entry. IMHO, 'never' does not need to be capitalized, especially since you included a period after it.
I doubt many FS reviewers would deem this text to be over the top (-;
Best wishes for your Sex prompt entry.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Feedback appreciated, thanks Mark.
