Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

I like your poem. You used good descriptive wording. The picture is intriguing. I can feel the mist on my face and the waves rippling across my bare feet! Great job!!
(((((((((((((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))'
God bless!!!
Patty

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020

Patty,

I am glad you liked this poem. Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and support.

Lots and lots of love my friend....Portia

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Esquisite offering for this prompt, dear Portia. I love the white on black and air of mystery. Sending you my best today as always and my very best to you for the contest,
Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020

Sally,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings my friend...Portia

Comment from Aphthong

Excellent

You created wonderful imagery with words and the picture.. Nice flow of words.. Nature is playful sometimes.. When she hide her mighty forces.. Great entry in the contest.. Good luck..

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes.

Blessings..Portia

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A thoughtful, reflective, mood poem. I like that you start at the "dawn of night" as night is the beginning of the new day and the ocean shows both power and playfulness. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020

Thanks so much my dear friend for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Hugs...Portia