The Woman At The Well
A story in a poem...4 total reviews
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
I liked your poem, because your piece was so descriptive, I could imagine it. Your word choice was also good, like always. BTW, is a story poem a story through the format of a poem? Because I've never heard anything like a story poem. Congratulations for the win! xoxo
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I liked your poem, because your piece was so descriptive, I could imagine it. Your word choice was also good, like always. BTW, is a story poem a story through the format of a poem? Because I've never heard anything like a story poem. Congratulations for the win! xoxo
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thanks! I find on this site there are tons of forms of poetry I never knew about. This one asked that you tell a story in poetry format. It was a challenge but I enjoyed it and so happy you liked it! xoxo
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You're welcome! xoxo
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You have taken a parable and woven it into a beautiful story in a poem. Your collection of words and your lovely art create a stellar presentation.
Very well done
"Then off she went to tell others
of the loving words He raved,
and many followed her that day
to the place where they were saved.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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You have taken a parable and woven it into a beautiful story in a poem. Your collection of words and your lovely art create a stellar presentation.
Very well done
"Then off she went to tell others
of the loving words He raved,
and many followed her that day
to the place where they were saved.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much! Our kind words are greatly appreciated!!
Comment from MissMerri
This is a great, though truncated, telling of a favorite story from the Bible. Jesus didn't always do what was advised or expected, did He? He did what He knew the Heavenly Father wanted Him to do. I enjoyed your rhymed version very much and feel you included the most important highlights here. I only saw one thing which I suppose is a typo:
***The woman listen (listened) to Him close
Thanks for the great message in a poem. Good luck in the contest too. MM
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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This is a great, though truncated, telling of a favorite story from the Bible. Jesus didn't always do what was advised or expected, did He? He did what He knew the Heavenly Father wanted Him to do. I enjoyed your rhymed version very much and feel you included the most important highlights here. I only saw one thing which I suppose is a typo:
***The woman listen (listened) to Him close
Thanks for the great message in a poem. Good luck in the contest too. MM
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Ah! Thank you so much! I?ll get that corrected! Appreciate your kind words also!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written story in a poem you have penned for the prompt about the woman at the well. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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This is a very nice and well written story in a poem you have penned for the prompt about the woman at the well. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you Teri! I always loved this parable! xoxo
