Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "Ex-Boyfriend"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from dragonpoet
Aiona,
This is a cute poem about the woodchuck in the picture. Eating is more important that chopping. I don't think woodchucks actually eat or chop wood. I think that is in the domain of beavers.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Aiona,
This is a cute poem about the woodchuck in the picture. Eating is more important that chopping. I don't think woodchucks actually eat or chop wood. I think that is in the domain of beavers.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thanks, Joan.
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You're welcome, Aiona.
Joan
Comment from susand3022
Aiona, word of advice... stay away from silver-tongued daemons named Chuck! Remember... Chuck rhymes with Suck... as a poet, you should be able to remember the equation. lol... I dated one in College. There was this stupid misunderstanding, he thought I cheated on him, I didn't, he wouldn't stand still long enough to listen to me, just broke up with me. The end... until decades later. I was getting divorced, he was a chef and came back to town to take care of his mother, and we got back together. Long story short, for several years, he led on me... and my son... (who started out calling him "Uncle Kuck" because he couldn't even say "ch" yet...) turned out to be sleeping with the whole state AND living with another girl while he told me that he had to move back in with his mother who was in bad health. (It turned out that she was but he had one of his friends move in with her) I'm only glad he didn't have time to sleep with me in all that time... (not that I was missing out on anything... my gay friend called him 'the broken crayon') Yeah... nothing worth bragging about. LOL When I found out, it was bad enough... I had actually broken up with him a few weeks before that, so it wasn't as bad as it could have been... but I called his sister and I said, "It's been years... how could he have done this to my son?" (who was now 8) She told me that she'd known about his 'indiscretions' for a long time... since she ran into one of her friends that he'd slept with a few years before... and she hadn't been the only one. Apparently, a lot of people knew... half the town knew... everyone but me. He found out when his new girlfriend called him on his phone... a number that I had, that she didn't. She got to page him and he called her back. According to her, he didn't have a phone. That's how I found out... she came into the store I worked in, we got to talking and it all kind of came out. It was an interesting morning. LOL
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Aiona, word of advice... stay away from silver-tongued daemons named Chuck! Remember... Chuck rhymes with Suck... as a poet, you should be able to remember the equation. lol... I dated one in College. There was this stupid misunderstanding, he thought I cheated on him, I didn't, he wouldn't stand still long enough to listen to me, just broke up with me. The end... until decades later. I was getting divorced, he was a chef and came back to town to take care of his mother, and we got back together. Long story short, for several years, he led on me... and my son... (who started out calling him "Uncle Kuck" because he couldn't even say "ch" yet...) turned out to be sleeping with the whole state AND living with another girl while he told me that he had to move back in with his mother who was in bad health. (It turned out that she was but he had one of his friends move in with her) I'm only glad he didn't have time to sleep with me in all that time... (not that I was missing out on anything... my gay friend called him 'the broken crayon') Yeah... nothing worth bragging about. LOL When I found out, it was bad enough... I had actually broken up with him a few weeks before that, so it wasn't as bad as it could have been... but I called his sister and I said, "It's been years... how could he have done this to my son?" (who was now 8) She told me that she'd known about his 'indiscretions' for a long time... since she ran into one of her friends that he'd slept with a few years before... and she hadn't been the only one. Apparently, a lot of people knew... half the town knew... everyone but me. He found out when his new girlfriend called him on his phone... a number that I had, that she didn't. She got to page him and he called her back. According to her, he didn't have a phone. That's how I found out... she came into the store I worked in, we got to talking and it all kind of came out. It was an interesting morning. LOL
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Heh!
Comment from Aphthong
Wonderful Cinquain Poem and picture.. You had done exceptionally well in this format.. The lines are rhyming too..A great entry in the contest poet... Good luck..
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Wonderful Cinquain Poem and picture.. You had done exceptionally well in this format.. The lines are rhyming too..A great entry in the contest poet... Good luck..
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile and that background check is vital when dating on line! Ha ha ha, your few words conjured up his personality perfectly here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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This made me smile and that background check is vital when dating on line! Ha ha ha, your few words conjured up his personality perfectly here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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LOL! Thanks! I've actually never done a background check either...... I met my husband online. Maybe I should have done one before I married him!
