Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Belated congrats on your prize, LisaMay. Love the alliteration: BFFBB. There is even the visual equivalent apart from the obvious rhyme with fea/bea, and ed/ed. Cheers from your new fan, LIZ.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2020

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Thanks for your comments, Liz.

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

This piece brings to mind all the lovely birds that fly outside my window and down my driveway. They are bright and lovely. The way the flutter around and swoop back and forth will catch almost anyone's eyes.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2020

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I am listening to a voice whispering :"feathered beauty -
bewitched!" My eyes are adding the color and my ears are picking up the humming of the wing. Thank you so much for sharing this small master piece and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

Comment from Scottishlass

Excellent

I thought Haiku was short form, 2-4-2 would be challenging to a wordy gal like myself. Great presentation of this format, you captured the subject very well!

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Oh yes, I'm ashamed to say it, although I've been the northern hemisphere on several occasions, I've never actually seen a hummingbird. But this is a wonderful entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

NICE job! I have seen a couple of these so far and I must admit, yours is the only one that has made me smile. I love the image AND the words. You're saying a great deal in only a few small words.

Thanks and good luck!~

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

They are certainly remarkable bird with the movements of a fairy! ;) Thanx for the smile in but eight syllables - great job! ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls!! :) :)

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

A glimpse of beauty in 2-4-2


Hello, my friend,

.....Hummingbird....is a fine entry in the 2/4/2 contest. Your syllable count is good. The presentation is very pretty. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I am surprised--and impressed-- how well you capture the essence of a hummingbird I only eight syllables. I also like your use of alliteration. Good luck in contest. Rod

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These birds are so delightful and so colourful too and I was certainly 'bewitched' by your words here, magical and entertaining, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2020